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The Crimson Knight
Member

since 2002-09-16

Posts 57
Reno, NV

0 posted 2002-09-16 09:06 PM

As the sun begins it’s slow downwardly descent
I ride into another sunset of the sand,
My visor shades my eyes from the last of glaring,
As the coolness of night hugs tightly to the land.
I stop my riding for the calmness of the night,
To relax on the ground my mind, body, and hand.

I’d caress you if you were near enough to touch,
Getting lost in the sparkle dancing in your eyes,
But you are three days and nights away on my ride,
And I must be content with the star sparkled skies
Till the southern clouds roll over the nightly lights,
And the chill of loneliness makes the heavens cry.

The morning sun finds me once agin on my way,
Both farther and closer by a night and a day.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2002-09-16 09:18 PM

And you kind sire are the bravest of knights!
I am quickly becoming a great fan of your writing...
Although I have a tendency to sigh loudly as I read your words.
Extremely well written.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

The Crimson Knight
Member

since 2002-09-16

Posts 57
Reno, NV

2 posted 2002-09-16 09:22 PM

Sigh away Enchanting Nancy,
It will help to find you in the dark
Till fingertips greet you and lip find your treat

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-09-16 09:33 PM

Oh Dang!! I think I'm going to swoon!!

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2002-09-16 09:49 PM

Oh, Crimson Knight, you write of night so well.....

"Till the southern clouds roll over the nightly lights, and the chill of loneliness makes the heavens cry..."

~ smiles ~
Earth Angel

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-09-16 09:50 PM

(smiles) Sooooooooo romantic, sweet friend, I too am already becoming a fan of your beautiful words as today you bring such chivalrous and timeless romance from your heart! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dirk, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

6 posted 2002-09-17 01:12 AM

But you are three days and nights away on my ride,
And I must be content with the star sparkled skies

That's a nice thought, I think I'll sleep on it.

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (09-17-2002 01:52 AM).]

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