Open Poetry #22 |
Behold the beauty.......................(Haiku) |
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
~ Behold the beauty Of the skies at twilight hour --Masterpiece Divine ~ [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-16-2002 10:12 PM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Earth Angel - at twilight when the sunset is in all its glory... BC |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very beautiful Linda ~ Hugs, Nancy ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
BC---ah, 'tis true! Thank you! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Nancy---well thank you kindly! ~ smiles across the miles ~ ----actually we live fairly close to each other! Linda |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
~Yes, I believe we do...email me...*S* with location~ *Once again...much enjoyed* |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Loved this beauty my friend - jwesley |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
jwesley---I humbly accept your kind words. May all your twilights be divine! Earth Angel |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
ah..i think i've seen this movie!! very nicely put into so few words...these haikus amaze me....! hugs, g "There ain't no doubt i love this Land....God Bless The USA!" L.Greenwood |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
g---have you written any haikus?---you'd be great at it! ~ smiles ~ EA |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
amethyst twilight ripples like a rolling stone splashing on skies lake (smiles) Oh Linda, this is sooooooo lovely, Yay!!! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
very nice, Linda One syllable too many on the third line which can be easily corrected by dropping the "A"... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, Noah, your's is soooooooooooo lovely! Thank you for responding in kind---only better! ~ smiles across the miles ~ Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Balladeer--- Thank you so much for catching that! I've made the edit! Can't catch you sleeping! ~ smiles ~ Earth Angel |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Lovely, just lovely Linda. Enjoyed. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Chris-- Thank you for the "lovely" reply! ~ smiles ~ Linda |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Yes indeed, the lord's pallet! Cor |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Cor----yes, indeed it is! ~ smiles ~ Linda |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I slice apple down, wet and sticky juice behind. Dark seeds of your eyes. That's my beauty moment for today. Mikey |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Very nice Angel....if ya drop the "a" on the third...oh, never mind |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
His lovely sunsets inspire your lovely poem two to remember Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mikey---And a "beauty" of a moment it was! ---with just a touch of gothic to prove it was written by you! tehe ~ smiling with you ~ Linda Lou |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Toe---Balladeer was kind enough to have already suggested the edit, and I have now done so. Please keep your eyes open when I slip up---I need all the help I can get! I'm pleased that you liked this iddy biddy piece! ~ smiles across the miles ~ EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Interloper---That was an incredibly sweet and very touching 'haikuic/senryuic' reply. May you see many, many more beautiful sunsets! EA |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Linda, such beautiful words inspire the gifting of a beautiful picture. Hugs, Marti |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Marti---I'm overwhelmed by your kindness and generosity---and what a picture you selected! It's perfect! That is exactly what I was trying to convey! Triple thank you! May all your twilight hours be as beautiful as you are! Linda |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Earth Angel~~~Your words only add to the beauty of the picture...Paul |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
superb capture of His Masterpiece Divine! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Paul---That was an incredibly sweet thing for you to say! May your days and nights be filled with the beauty of nature. ~ smiles to you ~ EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
VAS---Thank you! Kind of you to say so, but I think it is humanly impossible to do God's work any true justice---but I'll keep trying, because I am so moved by the beauty of nature. ~ smiles ~ EA |
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