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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2002-09-16 11:12 AM


Twenty years,
She has done her job so well,
All the while
Friendly smile
That she’s painted on her shell.
There each day
It’s her way
To never complain or whine
But to be
Still cheery
No matter what’s on her mind,
Twenty years
And that song still makes eyes swell.

Gloom


© Copyright 2002 Aszard Drazlom - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2002-09-16 11:16 AM


I used to be like that. sigh
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2002-09-16 11:18 AM


Professor Gloom
Makes mine swell too, good write, enjoyed.

Enchantress
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3 posted 2002-09-16 11:19 AM


Mmm lovely thoughts here...
What is the name of that old song may I ask?
Good write Gloom.
~Morning Hugs~

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-09-16 11:19 AM




(big hugggssssss) I too know that feeling where you work your day-job for so long with that same perdonality and you always wonder if they truly have that natural cheer or underneath the mask there may be a sorrow or ache defined! (sigh) This is well-said, sweet friend, I love how you think, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Aszard, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Professor Gloom
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5 posted 2002-09-16 11:31 AM


Thank you, passing shadows,
Just used to?  I guess that’s better than I,
That never was able to keep a continual cheery nature.
Pleased you enjoyed

Thank you, Seymour Tabin,
Memories can do that, Glad you enjoyed

Thank you, Enchantress,
I don’t know what she was listening to that caused the swelling of tears,
Perhaps if I go back that way, I might ask.
But for different people it’s a different song,
The tune changes but the emotion stays the same.

Thank you, Mistletoe Angel,
Your words are always a delight to see in response
Not all love how I think, but I am pleased my words are pleasing
To you.


Gloom

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6 posted 2002-09-16 02:48 PM


hey you...didn't forget you, either...

I now have "sentimental journey" running through my head!

poignant portraiture poetry from the professor....(alliture is sometimes annoying, eh? *grin* )

Say "hey" sometime, will ya?

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
7 posted 2002-09-16 04:17 PM


there are several songs I hear from longer than 20 years ago though, that bring me to tears with their memories.
But I guess eventually there will be new songs to take their place.

nicely done
As Always
M

Sybil
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8 posted 2002-09-16 04:55 PM



You may not have realized this would be so autobiographical for so many...

thank you.

Pilgrimage
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9 posted 2002-09-18 03:36 PM


Oh yeah. I hear it now.

Nan(Pilgrim variety)

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
10 posted 2002-09-18 03:39 PM


.........sings a new and stronger song now
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