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A Mother's Greed
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A Mother's Greed |
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elfin_tigress Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 101Someplace |
I could be accepted Why won't she? Because he's her son loves me as I am only person to call me beautiful is like me I'm his best friend She can't see Favor lesser friends Trust them more Leave me out Eliminate competition Afraid he'll love me more? Belly up Hair tossed wherever tear dew She despises me Kill me with her hands [This message has been edited by elfin_tigress (08-17-2002 01:43 PM).] |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Yikes!  I don't think I'd get along too well with this person either. God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Mom's eyes go blind when a friend steps in, out of love for her own. Give her time she will see you as he does. A wonderful read, I have been in this spot myself. alan |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssss) Oh my, I'm so sorry you've been struggling to get along with her, I agree with Alan, give her some time for sometimes it just takes awhile to adjust and let her see the loving person you truly are, and if she still doesn't learn to respect you, you have the right to ignore! (sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (08-17-2002 01:49 PM).] |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I just love your open expression here!!! Have been late to welcome such a poet!!!  Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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