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Open Poetry #22

Whither Comes the Light

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

0 posted 2002-08-17 12:48 PM

Whither comes the light
From the love in your heart
Slicing through the dead of night
Traces of love from somewhere up above

Atop the mountain is where you keep me
As yellow daisies sway in the wind in the valley
Your love carries me to places I would never see
Above and beyond the worldly chains of love

Flying freestyle on the clouds through reality and fantasy
Just one kiss is enough to send me flying high
Beyond where the mere minds can see
To a place deep in the heart of us

Never would I see this happening to me
Never in a million years did I dream
That this is the way love would be
Changing you and I into us

To fulfill the promise yet unspoken
From this loving heart of mine
I give this ring as a token
Of my undying love for you

© alan/icyheart

Gabriel Frost
Member

since 2002-08-15

Posts 216
Between midnight thoughts

1 posted 2002-08-17 01:07 PM

I like this piece.Loves really takes ppl to places they'd have never imagined.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2002-08-17 01:12 PM

Nicely written Alan, very nicely...
Good to see you...

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-08-17 01:15 PM

(smiles) Oh Alan, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, and through the light may you always find all the warmth and happiness your heart desires! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2002-08-20 03:59 PM

I like this tender, romantic work very much. *S*

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2002-08-20 04:41 PM

Alan - nice write from the heart...

BC

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