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Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

0 posted 2002-09-14 06:19 PM

If when stars collide they become one
will I find myself an intrinsic part of you?
for this love is cosmic, knowing no bounds
nestled deep within the nebula of my heart

Light years will pass & we shall remain
tenderly entwined as we soar through the milky way
locked in your embrace forever lost in your smile
we are comets in rainbow sizzle of eachother

You are my special journey, antares
you are my existence forever...

~Tier
9/02

[This message has been edited by Tiersdin (09-14-2002 06:20 PM).]

sunrise2227
Junior Member

since 2002-09-13

Posts 13
Ohio, USA, Keep the Faith

1 posted 2002-09-14 06:23 PM

Wow! Amazing words! This person is sure fortunate to have a love like this! Thank you for such inspiring words; they touched my heart.

Donna-Maria Jones

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2002-09-14 06:24 PM

Antares is fortunate...
my honest opinion
is that I always appreciate the times
when your name appears in the blue...

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

3 posted 2002-09-14 06:30 PM

Sunrise, thank you so much for your inspiring comment.

And to the true beauty behind the sun's rays, *hugs, hugs, & more hugs* Thank you!

~Tier
9/02

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-09-14 09:07 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, and may your heart always be embraced by true love and your horizons shining with stars and nebulas of endless dreams! (sigh) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tiersdin, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

5 posted 2002-09-15 02:55 PM

Tier,
Elegant, eloquent and especial.

mike

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

6 posted 2002-09-15 04:24 PM

Yeah Tier, I have to echo what Shakesquirrel said. T'was!

~Ed

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2002-09-15 05:03 PM

very beautiful...it's funny though how some can write as if the other completes them and someone else will come along and say you have to be whole yourself before another enters your life...just thinking about some of the responses I get...and the inconsistencies...

I enjoy the beauty of your words
*s
M

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2002-09-15 05:49 PM

Thank you for taking me on this incredibly romantic and cosmic journey of love.

This is truly a gem of a poem. Wonderfully written and magical. I read it in blissful state of sheer wonderment!

Earth Angel

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

9 posted 2002-09-15 06:29 PM

Smiling here at Wranx 'Shakesquirrel' reply.
But honestly, Tier, this is so beautiful!
I'm keeping it, you know. Thanks!

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

10 posted 2002-09-15 08:11 PM

Gotta go along with the word... what was it... B E A U T I F U L !
Yep, that was it... mucho enjoyed both reads my friend.

jwesley

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

11 posted 2002-09-16 12:19 PM

Antares smiles at Orion, and the universe begins.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

12 posted 2002-09-16 03:03 PM

Light years will pass & we shall remain
tenderly entwined as we soar through the milky way
locked in your embrace forever lost in your smile
we are comets in rainbow sizzle of eachother

Yes feeling as these are wonderful to experience, you have captured them well, enjoyed the read.

Too early for the rainbow, too early for the dove These are the final days, this is the darkness, this is the flood
L cohen

geenabee
Member

since 2002-09-10

Posts 59
NC--USA

13 posted 2002-09-16 04:05 PM

OK i love this poem because i'm a huge astronomy space cadet freakola sci fi channel buff !!
My favorite metaphors have to do with stars and universes and the whole thing, so U know I'm diggin' the whole poem!!
Tier, yer my fave scribbler!!
I'm learnin so much from readin all the wonderful work on here
and yep i agree shakesquirrel is a great nomer for our little fuzzy pal

gb

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