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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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 ~This day I lay down in quiet remember~ September 14, 2002 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Marge - you write and present like no one else. Most beautiful this is.... BC |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Marge, That special spirit has touched your soul and gifted you with a most delicate and beautiful write. Peace my friend, Hugs, Marti Every now and then take a good look at something not made |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Oh how beautiful. Both, the picture and the poem. I love the way you do this. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge, your quiet remember speaks more powerfully of life than the thunder of creation. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl darling heart sister this is a real find of wonder. Wonderful writing darling heart utterly utterly wonderful, I love it utterly utterly utterly, your writing is always filled with such amazing images Truly beautiful writing If the moons glow was written in rhyme If the sea flowed at a certain time If the stars dance knew only one song Or if life paused before it moved on I know they would pause and wait for you For you know them well you surely do You write the stars shine in softest hue You paint dreamer’s sky its what you do Where wisdom’s needed your touch is there And where souls need help you show you care Where mystery baffles you shed light Illuming the dark and shining night You are the find of mind that frees me Brushing my soul with real clarity You know I love your writing and this is awesome, I might be late but I do try to get here PiPITIS coming soon to YOUR neighbourhood  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy   Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marge, I wish I could see this one, but my ISP is misbehaving...so as soon as I CAN see what you left here for all of us, I shall come back and comment appropriately... |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is breathtakingly beautiful, Marge. Lovely, indeed. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Marge...Another wonderful gift you bring to us on gentle wings. Thank You...Paul[This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (09-14-2002 09:22 PM).] |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Lovely Marge...no one else could have matched the picture and the words as wonderfully. jwesley |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Breathtaking Marge. A lovely presentation. You always create such wonderful works of art. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BillCharles~ My friend ... I thank you again~  Marti~ Sometimes ... it is such a needed visit~ Thank you kind lady~ SweetSue~ I thank you for the gentleness of your replies~ Kethry~ You touch me with your reply~ Thank you~ MarshaLove~ I insisted that you post it ... you did ... and my heart thanks you beyond what I can express~ I needed the lift dear girl ... *hugs* *hugs* *hugs* Karilea~ It happens .... thanks for trying~ OhDenise~ I sooooooooooo appreciate YOU~ I miss you~ Paul~ You are aware that I thank you so much for your encouragement ... it means a lot to me~ JWesley~ Thank you dear sir~ She flutters into the very spirit of me and leaves me feeling comforted~ WhiteRose~ I thank you so much for your sweet replies~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
As usual beautiful!! Betty |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: So beautiful and touching! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Marge, you gifted us with the honey of YOUR soul, with this lovely piece of writing! ~ smiles ~ Linda |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dear Margie Your quiet remember made for a beautiful and inspiring read...thanks ever so much for sharing ~hugs~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Marge, this IS wonderful! Thank you! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Your quiet remembers are always more than just fluttered moments. Beautifully presented but even more beautiful is the heart from which the words flow. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I am pleased my ISP is not misbehaving... Cause this is a very beautiful poem complemented by a superb pic... Thanx Marge... |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
marge- this was such beautiful inspiration. your heart flowed through this...such lovely writing as always from you. take care. amy  "if irish eyes are smiling...they are probably up to something" :) |
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