Open Poetry #22 |
For Daniel |
smitty-j Member
since 2002-09-13
Posts 72Florida, USA |
There’s a part of myself I’ve longed to share with someone much like me. I’ve kept it close and hidden there so no ones eyes could see. I dared not share it with a soul for fear of being spurned. I dared not dream to find the one for which my heart had yearned. Now I see his face is there and open of myself A place in which his words have home and love for no one else. I open now this part to you and pray you take it gently. This heart is true and needs but one I long to feel you near me. Take my heart and take my soul They’re yours for now and ever. You’ve made me feel that I am whole And I’ll forget you never. Julie |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, may you and Daniel share a lifetime of happiness and faith together in love, God Bless You Both, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is just beautiful. It is so nice when you find someone who really cares. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
How romantic. *sighs* Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is very well written. I enjoyed it and I am sure Daniel will too. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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fishop Member
since 2002-09-13
Posts 79ohio |
very very nice Julie, beautiful line "A place in which his words have home and love for no one else." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
What a sweet and tender poem of love. I hope this Daniel is worth it---because you certainly are! ~ smiles ~ EA |
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Magician Member
since 2002-08-14
Posts 126 |
Here's a good one from the back pages. Very soft and gentle. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is quite lovely. Nan(Pilgrim variety) |
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smitty-j Member
since 2002-09-13
Posts 72Florida, USA |
Thank you to everyone who took the time to read. This really is a sweet place. Might have to stick around a bit and see how deep I can sink my feet...big smile goin here Cheers, J |
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