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The Intruder!
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The Intruder! |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania 
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The Intruder Asleep at last, drifting toward dreamland Wrapped in warmth and peace Falling Deeper Deeper Then.... Beep! Beep! Beep! Arms flailing towards my intruder, This thief of sleep Finally subduing my unwanted guest I smile in triumph! crawling back in my bed [This message has been edited by Miah (09-14-2002 03:50 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (giggles in delight) Curse that intruder, if only it had a mouth so it could be washed out with soap! LOL! This is a delightful debut, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Miah, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Miah, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
Dear Noah, What a delight you are! How kind of you to say such loveing words. Thank you so much for your sweet response and your warm welcome. I look forward to getting to know all of you more.  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Miah, I like this poem...very effective title... grabs the interest well. Oh yes, I know all about these noisy little rascals...I have two of them, sitting patiently at the head of my bed... Waiting silently....for the right moment... BEEP BEEP BEEP! Nice to see you hear at Passions, enjoy yourself... |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
Magnus, Thank you for your welcome, I will enjoy myself here, its a lovely place. And Yes I think I will get rid of that noisy thing and get me a dog instead.  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Dogs are good. Cats are better! Welcome to Passions, Miah. I see in your first post that you have a lovely sense of wit and humor. I'm going to personally like having you around here! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! This sure brought a smile to my face! I hope this was about your alarm clock!  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Miah - darn beep, beep, beep intruder.... BC |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
Sunshine, Thank you so much for your welcome. Passions already feels like a home. And Cats are awesome, I have one myself that thinks he is king of the castle. Poet DiVne, It would be an alarm clock  I think I may go buy the kind that has different sounds on it, like waves and falling rain. Of course my luck I would be running to the bathroom every five seconds. :-) And thank you for welcoming me, you all are so kind.and Bill, I am glad you understand that darn BEEP! Thanks for posting |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS MIAH! Enjoyed your first post very much. I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
*chuckles* Enjoyed reading this, Miah... Welcome to passions! ~tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
Thank you Enchantress for your warm welcome, I am looking forward to seeing everyones work as well. Take care. Tiersdin Glad you liked it. Thank you for the welcome as well. hugs. [This message has been edited by Miah (09-14-2002 06:34 PM).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Miah, Welcome to Passions. From the comments it seems we've all experienced that particular intruder. You wrote this well. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
Kethry, Thank you very much. I think we all have had those moments too. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Haha, I have a really cheap beep beep that often doesn't know what time it is. OOPS, maybe it helps to set it to 'alarm' ??? Welcome. We can always use more lighthearted humor like this on these blue pages. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Miah, Welcome to Passions!! Have fun! Enjoyed your first post. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Miah~ Welcome to the greatest circle of poets and friends on the entire Internet~ You're gonna like it here~ Enjoyable entrance into our little family home~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
Midnitesun, Thank you so much. I know what you mean, I have often set my clock for my alarm and my alarm for my clock. hehehe Nightshade, thank you for your welcome, I am glad you enjoyed it. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Welcome to Passions. Cursed alarms. I say they should all come with hammers for those days you just need to stay in bed. BANG! No more beep beep beep.  |
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