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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486
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Secrets Scripted Feathered hand dances on pale white paper, secrets scripted in the color of never tell. Midnight thoughts tossed over the empty side of magnificent ships that will never sail. Lighthouse beacon sings bright in the fog, music played in the tune of never heard. Morning kisses torn from the tattered book of old love poems with too many words. And there...yes there, against the shameless sky flies my love among the hummingbirds too fast to kiss the coming Spring And all the taste of sweet topaz eyes are lost in his hovering wings. The rose nor tupil nor honeysuckle blooms give paths to the ends of his search. Where hands dig deep into unwatered soil to till a house made of root rooms built for a song bird to perch. Feathered hand dances on pale white paper, secrets scripted in the color of gone away. Midnight dreams slip to the darker side of endless wakes to these songless days |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Love the words, love the images and love the feel, but I can't say I really understand if there's a message...maybe that's the secrets that are scripted and must so remain. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
WhileIWasGone All I can say is, sory about that. Enjoyed the write. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Truly a very beautiful poem....love the images within this.... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The softest touch, this... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, and may all these secrets be revealed in loves grace and fill you with happiness, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dea~ 'Morning kisses torn from the tattered book of old love poems with too many words.' Oh ... this message is soooooo felt~ Lovely poeticizing dear lady~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
DeaDi, I can see you here, within these words. This is beautiful. ~Ed In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward". |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I'm so glad to have found this (or did I un-find it?). Loved this, DDA! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Feathered hand dances on pale white paper, secrets scripted in the color of never tell This is a beautiful write. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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