Scent of pine (inspired by Lady Ollyne's Her One and Only)

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Open Poetry #22

Scent of pine (inspired by Lady Ollyne's Her One and Only)

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

0 posted 2002-09-13 07:16 PM

The second I finished reading Lady Ollyne's wonderful verse, the following popped into my head:

Scent of pine
If her clothes smell pine,
she shall be thine.
If scent is sweat,
she shall forget.
If scent is dew,
she loves you.
If scent is sea,
she will leave thee.

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-09-13 07:20 PM

This was awesome Mikey.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

2 posted 2002-09-13 08:12 PM

Nice one, Mikey...

*smiles*
~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

3 posted 2002-09-13 08:32 PM

Mikey, Mikey..you always get a smile out of me

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-09-13 09:09 PM

(smiles) Oh Michael, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, it is amazing how fragrances can tell so much to someone and hown they feel sometimes, BRAVO, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-09-13 09:12 PM

Love this Mikey...
Cute, but is it true?
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2002-09-13 09:18 PM

Can we have more poppers?
This was delightful!

WhileIWasGone
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since 2002-07-18

Posts 486

7 posted 2002-09-13 10:14 PM

WOW...M ...very nice work. Enjoy your work so much!

DeaDiAmore

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

8 posted 2002-09-14 03:02 PM

Thanks, everyone.
Yep, this was a strange'un.

.m.

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