navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #22 » Scent of pine (inspired by Lady Ollyne's Her One and Only)
Open Poetry #22
Post A Reply Post New Topic Scent of pine (inspired by Lady Ollyne's Her One and Only) Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
bsquirrel
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855


0 posted 2002-09-13 07:16 PM


The second I finished reading Lady Ollyne's wonderful verse, the following popped into my head:

Scent of pine
If her clothes smell pine,
she shall be thine.
If scent is sweat,
she shall forget.
If scent is dew,
she loves you.
If scent is sea,
she will leave thee.

© Copyright 2002 MPC - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-09-13 07:20 PM


This was awesome Mikey.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Tiersdin
Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364
east coast
2 posted 2002-09-13 08:12 PM


Nice one, Mikey...

*smiles*
~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
3 posted 2002-09-13 08:32 PM


Mikey, Mikey..you always get a smile out of me

M

Mistletoe Angel
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Empyrean
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
4 posted 2002-09-13 09:09 PM




(smiles) Oh Michael, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, it is amazing how fragrances can tell so much to someone and hown they feel sometimes, BRAVO, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
5 posted 2002-09-13 09:12 PM


Love this Mikey...
Cute, but is it true?
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
6 posted 2002-09-13 09:18 PM



Can we have more poppers?
This was delightful!

WhileIWasGone
Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486

7 posted 2002-09-13 10:14 PM


WOW...M ...very nice work. Enjoy your work so much!

DeaDiAmore

bsquirrel
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855

8 posted 2002-09-14 03:02 PM


Thanks, everyone.
Yep, this was a strange'un.

.m.

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #22 » Scent of pine (inspired by Lady Ollyne's Her One and Only)

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary