Open Poetry #22 |
The Scent Of Her Perfume |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
He savours the scent of her perfume As he nibbles her salty skin Feelings so sensually erotic To feel this good must be a sin Her eyes are so amazing The most beautiful emerald green Her face is total perfection Such beauty he has never seen He studies her expression A look of elegance and grace He feels her heart beat faster As his finger moves around her face Their bodies share the same hunger Passions burn like never before He whispers to her sweet nothings As he gently lowers her to the floor Two hearts now joined in harmony As they succumb to their desires Their night of romance just beginning Beside the warming glow of the fire I am in motion |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sue, this makes me yearn for winter's coming. Lynne Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Very romantic! Cor |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ooooooh Sue, this is very sensual. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Another Red Hot love story from our friend in Australia. There must be something in the drinking water down under!!! Beautiful writing Sue. Hugs, Marti Every now and then take a good look at something not made |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I agree with Marti, surely there must be something in that water...Oh...you say that you don't drink it? This is natural to you? Yes, it must be... Beautifully done SueT... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suetang Brought back memories. LOL enjoyed |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Sue...really enjoyd this one! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Sue, this is so sensually beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, you bring such passion and romance to these pages always, may loves perfume always give you sweet dreams, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Sue - wow what sensual feelings come over me as I read this - I can feel the warmth and desire!! Paul |
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smitty-j Member
since 2002-09-13
Posts 72Florida, USA |
I loved your poem...very romantic, just the kind of stuff I can really get into. Julie |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sue - my goodness, this is most romantic. I love the scent of her perfume... BC |
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