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Suetang
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-09-13 06:25 PM




He savours the scent of her perfume
As he nibbles her salty skin
Feelings so sensually erotic
To feel this good must be a sin

Her eyes are so amazing
The most beautiful emerald green
Her face is total perfection
Such beauty he has never seen

He studies her expression
A look of elegance and grace
He feels her heart beat faster
As his finger moves around her face

Their bodies share the same hunger
Passions burn like never before
He whispers to her sweet nothings
As he gently lowers her to the floor

Two hearts now joined in harmony
As they succumb to their desires
Their night of romance just beginning
Beside the warming glow of the fire

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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Victoria Australia
1 posted 2002-09-13 06:34 PM


Sue,
this makes me yearn for winter's coming.
Lynne

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



the_loner_23
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2002-09-13 06:43 PM


Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Corinne
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state of confusion
3 posted 2002-09-13 06:49 PM


Very romantic!

Cor

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just out of reach
4 posted 2002-09-13 07:07 PM


Ooooooh Sue, this is very sensual. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

NewEnglandlazurlu
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since 2002-01-04
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A Mountain Paradise
5 posted 2002-09-13 07:41 PM


Another Red Hot love story from our friend in Australia. There must be something in the drinking water down under!!!

Beautiful writing Sue.

Hugs, Marti

Every now and then take a good look at something not made
with hands -- a mountain, a star, the power of the ocean.
There will come to you wisdom,

Magnus
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6 posted 2002-09-13 07:46 PM


I agree with Marti,  surely there must be
something in that water...Oh...you say that
you don't drink it?  This is natural to
you?  Yes, it must be...

Beautifully done SueT...

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
7 posted 2002-09-13 07:51 PM


Suetang
Brought back memories. LOL enjoyed

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
8 posted 2002-09-13 08:15 PM


Beautiful Sue...really enjoyd this one!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Mistletoe Angel
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9 posted 2002-09-13 08:59 PM




(smiles) Oh Sue, this is so sensually beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, you bring such passion and romance to these pages always, may loves perfume always give you sweet dreams, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15
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Ohio, USA
10 posted 2002-09-14 12:32 PM


Sue - wow what sensual feelings come over me as I read this - I can feel the warmth and desire!!  Paul
smitty-j
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since 2002-09-13
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Florida, USA
11 posted 2002-09-14 04:16 PM


I loved your poem...very romantic, just the kind of stuff I can really get into.
Julie

Bill Charles
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12 posted 2002-09-14 05:06 PM


Sue - my goodness, this is most romantic. I love the scent of her perfume...

BC

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