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Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2002-09-13 06:24 PM

Ah! I can't help it
But to feel this way
Like an over chewed
Piece of gum
Stale ever losing its flavour
My nerves cringe
Like my senses
Are witnessing nails down a black board
This is how I feel
When I'm ignored
I feel stale
Old, useless
I can't help it
I try visiting my conscience
Each time I feel this way
But I fail
I won't allow myself the time of day
Nor the patience
I can't help it
I always feel this way
Stale...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-09-13 06:36 PM

Awesome the way you express your feelings.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2002-09-13 06:36 PM

Ceinwyn,
I like the taste of dust and ash in this one. Vivid imagery.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2002-09-13 06:58 PM

Well done. Enjoyed...but I don't think you're stale.

Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

4 posted 2002-09-13 07:13 PM

Kristen,
Now write one called slate --
imbue it with stone
and images.

Mike

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2002-09-13 07:34 PM

Ceinwyn
Charming write, enjoyed.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-09-13 09:13 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Kristen, my heart oes out to you, may your days be filled with so much flavor and joy soon and bring smiles to your heart! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

7 posted 2002-09-13 10:42 PM

Nothing "Stale" here, Catwyn.

You seem to be finding a new and confident voice lately.

~wranx

In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward".

~wranx~

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