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Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2002-09-13 01:01 PM

A poet always wonders
When and where a poem will come
Never mind which witch eats a peanutbutter sandwich
Even even in the morning or night
Where you can find a knight - ride across the field
I'm feeling kind of hoarse.
While you are riding your horse
So won't you sew with me
a quilt we can make
even if its fake
My son looks to the sun
to see where Jesus wears his clothes
He will not close his doors
to us he loves us
I write poetry for a living
even though I am hardly ever right
excuse me I must go pee,
then after I have to float my peas in a gravy lake on my mashed potatoes.
I like my long hair,
my brother has an ugly hare.
I can see Sally at the sea shore
Selling her sea shells.
Have you seen such a dear young baby deer.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-09-13 01:02 PM

This is good.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

2 posted 2002-09-13 01:04 PM

How neat!

Nan(Pilgrim variety)

paladin

Senior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

3 posted 2002-09-13 01:04 PM

Cool stream of thought poem.

paladin

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2002-09-13 01:06 PM

Just let those words roll onto the page, then sit back and smile awhile.

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

5 posted 2002-09-13 01:11 PM

Hey all- I am at school right now!!! Its really funny because that poem is a hw assignment and I was excited to get feedback like 4 min after I posted it!
Thnx again Midenite

Love Kellie

EarthenSoul
Member

since 2002-05-30

Posts 163
WA, USA

6 posted 2002-09-13 02:36 PM

Excellent job of keeping it rolling. Hope you get an 'A'!

[This message has been edited by EarthenSoul (09-13-2002 02:37 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-09-13 02:40 PM

(smiles) And you sure do deserve an A+ on this, sweet friend, stream of consciousness is always a wonderful technique to writing and the most honest kind I feel too, which is what makes your poetry so special here! (big hugggssssss) Good luck, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kellie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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