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in the middle of the moonlight
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in the middle of the moonlight |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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in the middle of the moonlight he calls me beautiful-- sleep releases me and my eyelids slowly rise to show me this man before me who has awakened in the night... through the blinds on my window moon-paint laces his loving face i smile as my eyes seek sleep again he kisses me and melts back down beside me he loves me... even when he wakes in the middle of the moonlight he calls me beautiful... -dgvarner 9-10-02 "There ain't no doubt i love this Land....God Bless The USA!" L.Greenwood |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is a beautiful piece of writing. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
So good to see your smiling face again! Missed you. And he only tells the truth, yanno. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
ohh ohh..Beautiful..I am such a hopeless romantic and reading these words puts so much hope back into this shattered/cynical/contradictive heart...*hugs* Kristen If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
dgvarner Lovely write, enjoyed. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo lovely, sweet friend, I love it, may your heart always be blessed with a love this beautiful, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I don't think a moment could ever be better than that moment...when one wakes to say a special person is beautiful... This poem is beautiful....thanx and wecome back...have missed you.. Magnus.. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
This is very lovely from your pen. parker |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Fortunate is she who has had a moment such as this, and fortunate is she who's quill captures that moment so well. ~ smiles ~ Earth Angel |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
LONER23..i thank you.. MIDNITESUN..very good to be remembered..  thank you..CEINWYN..i think we all have a bit of a contradicting heart..lol glad to put a little hope back into it.. SEYMOUR..thanks a bunch.. NOAH..you always have a kind word...thank you! MAGNUS..thank you for 'beautiful'..and for the welcome back! PARKER..i thank you..and for gracing my thread..  EARTH ANGEL..i do indeed feel fortunate..! thanks! hugs, g "There ain't no doubt i love this Land....God Bless The USA!" L.Greenwood |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg~ I'm just smiling because he calls you beautiful. Love ya, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
A lovely poem. Too early for the rainbow, too early for the dove These are the final days, this is the darkness, this is the flood |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
dgvarner - and a most beautiful poem... BC |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DG~ He obviously sees the beauty that we see in you~ This is lovely, hon~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Aye, sharp he is, me friend... there's the beauty he see's with us, and there is, I'm know, a beauty meant only for him... great write... jwesley |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
VICK..glad youre smiling! thanks..VANDANA..i thank you for reading.. BRIAN..thank you! (gripping signature youve got there....) BC..thank you much... MARGIE..thank you for lovely... JWESLEY..thank you much...he sees more than i see in a mirror, i'll tell you that....lol JAMESMICHAEL..thanks! so good to know that even when i'm gone for unGodly amts of time, you will still read me when i come back..! lol thank you! hugs, g "There ain't no doubt i love this Land....God Bless The USA!" L.Greenwood |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Indeed it is good to see your work again my friend, thank you for sharing this gem. Take care! Maybe all one can do is hope to end up with the right regrets. ~Arthur Miller |
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