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dgvarner
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0 posted 2002-09-13 12:02 PM



in the middle of the moonlight
     he calls me beautiful--
sleep releases me
and my eyelids slowly rise
to show me this man before me
who has awakened in the night...
through the blinds on my window
moon-paint laces his loving face
i smile
as my eyes seek sleep again
he kisses me
and melts back down beside me
he loves me...
even when he wakes in the middle
of the moonlight
     he calls me
          beautiful...

-dgvarner
  9-10-02

"There ain't no doubt i love this Land....God Bless The USA!" L.Greenwood

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-09-13 12:04 PM


This is a beautiful piece of writing.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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2 posted 2002-09-13 12:06 PM


So good to see your smiling face again! Missed you.
And he only tells the truth, yanno.

Ceinwyn
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3 posted 2002-09-13 12:11 PM


ohh ohh..Beautiful..I am such a hopeless romantic and reading these words puts so much hope back into this shattered/cynical/contradictive heart...*hugs*

Kristen

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2002-09-13 12:12 PM


dgvarner
Lovely write, enjoyed.

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5 posted 2002-09-13 04:20 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo lovely, sweet friend, I love it, may your heart always be blessed with a love this beautiful, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 2002-09-13 05:55 PM


I don't think a moment could ever be better
than that moment...when one wakes to say
a special person is beautiful...

This poem is beautiful....thanx and wecome
back...have missed you..

Magnus..

Parker
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7 posted 2002-09-16 12:21 PM


This is very lovely from your pen.

parker

Earth Angel
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8 posted 2002-09-16 08:22 AM



Fortunate is she who has had a moment such as this, and fortunate is she who's quill captures that moment so well.

~ smiles ~
Earth Angel

dgvarner
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9 posted 2002-09-16 09:41 PM


LONER23..i thank you..
MIDNITESUN..very good to be remembered.. thank you..
CEINWYN..i think we all have a bit of a contradicting heart..lol  glad to put a little hope back into it..
SEYMOUR..thanks a bunch..
NOAH..you always have a kind word...thank you!
MAGNUS..thank you for 'beautiful'..and for the welcome back!  
PARKER..i thank you..and for gracing my thread..
EARTH ANGEL..i do indeed feel fortunate..! thanks!

hugs, g

"There ain't no doubt i love this Land....God Bless The USA!" L.Greenwood

vlraynes
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10 posted 2002-09-17 06:34 PM



dg~
I'm just smiling because he calls you beautiful.
Love ya,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

vandana
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11 posted 2002-09-17 07:25 PM


nice
brian madden
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12 posted 2002-09-17 07:26 PM


A lovely poem.

Too early for the rainbow, too early for the dove These are the final days, this is the darkness, this is the flood
L cohen

Bill Charles
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13 posted 2002-09-17 08:11 PM


dgvarner - and a most beautiful poem...

BC

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14 posted 2002-09-17 08:17 PM


DG~
He obviously sees the beauty that we see in you~
This is lovely, hon~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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jwesley
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15 posted 2002-09-17 08:50 PM


Aye, sharp he is, me friend... there's the beauty he see's with us, and there is, I'm know, a beauty meant only for him... great write...

jwesley

JamesMichael
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16 posted 2002-09-19 02:13 AM


Wonderful...James
dgvarner
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17 posted 2002-09-19 07:04 AM


VICK..glad youre smiling!     thanks..
VANDANA..i thank you for reading..
BRIAN..thank you!  (gripping signature youve got there....)
BC..thank you much...
MARGIE..thank you for lovely...
JWESLEY..thank you much...he sees more than i see in a mirror, i'll tell you that....lol
JAMESMICHAEL..thanks!

so good to know that even when i'm gone for unGodly amts of time, you will still read me when i come back..!  lol  thank you!

hugs, g

"There ain't no doubt i love this Land....God Bless The USA!" L.Greenwood

EagleOne
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18 posted 2002-09-21 10:47 PM


Indeed it is good to see your work again my friend, thank you for sharing this gem. Take care!

Maybe all one can do is hope to end up with the right regrets.  ~Arthur Miller

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