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Summer Heat
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Summer Heat |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas 
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The pavement burned like a morphine smile As sky drops steamed on the ground The Libra sun has rose so high As if to never come down  Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!? |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Very vivid in the heat of it, save for the morphine smile. To that I have no frame of reference. That could be a good thing. But the beginning and the end seems to convey how hot it was/is. Searing. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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EarthenSoul Member
since 2002-05-30
Posts 163WA, USA |
Such impact in so few words. I absolutely love this. |
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chitsank Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 88 |
Hey,ur poem makes me feel the heat even more. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
like this a lot... the first line adding to the dazed overheated feeling of the whole... good stuff in so few lines!!! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
the morphine smile left me a little numb but the rest was incandescant. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) I know these summer days ever too well too, Colorado has been so very dry yet the fiesta sun is wonderful! (big hugggsssss) This is a delightful sun-shining poem, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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