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chitsank
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since 2002-08-13
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0 posted 2002-09-12 11:44 PM


The night sky filled with stars winking at me
at me, an ardent star lover
lover of the night sky
sky that's like a velvet
a velvet studded with pearls
pearls stringed necklace for which I crave
crave and appeal to the strars to form
form the pearls in my necklace
necklace I will proudly own and wear
wear with great delight and feel grateful
feel grateful and thank the the sparkling beauties
sparkling beaties dazzling in the night sky
the night sky filled with stars winking at me



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EarthenSoul
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since 2002-05-30
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1 posted 2002-09-12 11:48 PM


A SkySoul as I am Earthen.  I admire your spiritual imagination.
chitsank
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2 posted 2002-09-12 11:57 PM


Thanx EarthenSoul for ur kind words oappreciation.
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3 posted 2002-09-12 11:59 PM




(smiles) Oh my gosh, I love this, you bring star-spangled suprises of poetic beauty ton these pages, may all your dreams come true and be beaded in the sky like the angel tears of joy, I love it, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

chitsank
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4 posted 2002-09-13 12:01 PM


Thanx Noah, for sharing ur views on my poem.
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