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wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2002-09-12 11:33 AM

                        it's smashed like an atom
                        it's beat like a drum
                        once downed with an asp’rin
                        it's chased with a Tums

                        as Love is broken up
                        like ev'ry element
                        it's yet, to always be
                        held high in wonderment

                        is Love, while under glass
                        by a definition
                        a cold environment?
                        not by premonition!

                        what toy is bought anew
                        to ever stay unwrapped
                        what dog won’t chew his leg
                        once, blindly, in the trap

                        what love would even last
                        beside this detriment
                        as Cert'nly it's well
                        I've none to represent

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (09-13-2002 12:27 PM).]

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2002-09-12 12:19 PM

wayoutwalt
Well done enjoyed the read.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2002-09-12 12:25 PM

Bravo, Walt!
Well written.

EarthenSoul
Member

since 2002-05-30

Posts 163
WA, USA

3 posted 2002-09-12 12:26 PM

Entertaining as always.

elisaseyes
Member

since 1999-07-15

Posts 196
fort worth texas

4 posted 2002-09-12 05:53 PM

Please, you know you have to have it

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2002-09-13 08:07 AM

Always know it will be an interesting read when I open one of your sharings... this is no exception..

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

6 posted 2002-09-13 10:38 AM

Perhaps if you take an antacid or two you will feel better about love.
Cool poem.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

7 posted 2002-09-14 05:31 PM

I never said thank yuh to all ya'll

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