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0 posted 2002-09-11 09:17 PM



United

It is amazing
How in one single moment
Our existence can shift
Peace, security, tranquility
Lost in a suffocating haze
Of smoke, ashes, and ruins
Nightmares become reality
As the haunting echoes
Of a thousand screams
And millions of tears
Ripple through our people
A wave of numbing shock
Sadness and compassion
Take a hold of our souls
Our hearts reaching blindly
Attempting to comprehend
Searching for what has been
So violently taken from us
Strong, proud and united
We collectively stand tall
Our heads held high
Even as the teardrops fall
We bond as a nation
Refusing to give up
Refusing to give in
We will pick up the pieces
We will begin to rebuild
With an unwavering faith
And love for our country
Faith in our God above
And faith in our strong spirit
Proudly, loudly exclaiming
For all the world to hear
That we are
The United States Of America
We will NOT fall
We will NOT surrender
United, we will prevail.

© Copyright 2002 Tara Baldridge - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-09-11 09:22 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Yes, we will prevail, for we trust in God, we are aided by the flame of Lady Liberty, we are America, God Bless America! (big hugggsssssss) I join you in prayers and sympathies for our victims families and children, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

(God Bless America)

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-09-11 09:28 PM


tara,

this was so beautiful & powerful...
this is just so heartfelt, i love
the fire you put into this...emotions
over run, brilliant write!

take care
amy

"if irish eyes are smiling...they are probably up to something" :)

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3 posted 2002-09-12 12:34 PM


"The people united will never be defeated."

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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4 posted 2002-09-12 01:58 PM



What an incredibly powerful and patriotic piece of poetry!

Earth Angel

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5 posted 2002-09-12 02:30 PM


Tara, I couldn't have said it better if I'd tried.  Excellent, my friend. *hugs* and great to see a post of yours here.  You've been missed.  
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6 posted 2002-09-12 03:46 PM


*waving my flag high*
Powerful, patriotic, and full of fire.  Exactly what our country needs of us all.  I'll stand beside you, UNITED!

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