Open Poetry #22 |
Bridging The Gap... a re-post for 9/11 |
Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
but on a radiant September morn the gap was bridged as fear was born in the grips of fiery terror, orange streaks across the sky our aging flowers withered now, we no longer wonder why why our parents loved the stripes and stars we understood their unseen scars amongst the ashes, tears were shed war declared,three thousand dead the generations forged a bond of caring of truth and trust and tragic sharing the flower children's leaves are wilted our blossoms now are slightly tilted instead of proudly wearing rags the flower kids are draped in flags ~ and in our wear of red - white - blue our patriotism is true...for you... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Lyra, I understand what you are saying, that so many of our modern youth has kind of taken His trust for granted and failed to understand what their predecessors went through, now after this terrible tragedy I think they all know how they truly feel and together these drenched flowers can start to reach for the sun and hope to grow again slowly, sympathizing to the victims and their families, reaching for hope! (wipes tears) God Bless You, sweet friend, my heart joins yours and all of America and our friends today, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lyra, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton (God Bless America) "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much, Karilea... At least one good thing came out of 9/11... I think we have become more patriotic and I thing that the generation gap between our generation and our parents' is slowly closing because of the shared tragedy. ~ hugs in sadness and survival Lyra |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is awesome. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much, Noah... I think the youth of today (your generation) is doing great... But we (my generation) had lots of issues which divided us from our parents... and I think that a lot of these issues came clear on that awful day. ~ hugs from a flower chipmunk Lyra |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much, Julie... ~ lots of hugs Lyra |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
How did I ever miss this....guess I wasn't around that day.... Lyra, this says a lot about a lesson we all could learn from our parents who suffered through a tragedy far greater than any we have ever experienced.... I hope the death of these innocents has taught us something about life.... |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
WOWOWOW!! What a wonderful pair of closing lines! You done real good here, chipmunk lady Yes, it is true....attitudes change when war comes close to home....or home....it's called reality. Fantastic, Lyra |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks Barry... It seems that when we are young and invincible... our elders are always wrong! But as we grow older, we realize that we have lots to learn from them. ~ many hugs Lyra |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks Michael.... Isn't that the truth... It feels a lot different in our own backyards... ~ hugs from a flag draped chipmunk flower kid Lyra |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Almost lost in the scene of the memorial at ground zero a young woman puts a single rose in the chain link fence.Flower power still lives. paladin |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
And seeing those young people draped in flags is a wonderful thing - You've captured a generation-bind that has brought us all together as One Nation.. One World.. under God... Nicely done, dear chipmunk lady.. |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
MunkSter sweet gal when Freedom of our life is on the line the division line between youth's naiivty and elder wisdom merges as one line of Pride and Preservation. Truly an outstanding sentiment and poem, MunkSter. Deepened my understanding of what i was feeling today that confused me. jeff |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Lyra, This was beautiful! I tried not to watch tv to much on 9/11 but it was hard not to.I did my share of crying as I`m sure alot of people did.I hope you`re feeling better.TAKE CARE! Love, Juanita |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks for telling me about that flower, Paladin... its so good to know that flower power is still around. ~ hugs and cheers for flowerkids Lyra |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much, Nan... I guess if theres ANY good at all to come out of this horrible situation, its that respect for parents seems to be back in vogue and the generation gap... at least the one between our generation and our parents' has almost closed... leads me to think that there must be something positive about EVERYTHING, but sometimes we just can't see it until all of the fog lifts. ~ hugs from one foggy chipmunk tonight Lyra |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much, Jeff... I couldn't see this for quite a while afterward, but looking at pictures in Time Magazine and Newsweek and in the newspapers and on TV, there would always be young and old working side by side... When I was in my twenties... no self respecting flower child would ever wear a flag anywhere, or even display one on their house or on their car... and now everyone is doing it. Its so nice to see the return of patriotism once more. ~ patriotic flower child grins and hugs Lyra |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much, Juanita... I had my surgery on Sept.12, and afterward, I couldn't do anything but watch TV... and we were still being bombarded with all of this stuff. I guess we really do need to see it, even if it is the stuff of nightmares. I am feeling better enough to sit at my computer, but I am still very tired. ~ loving hugs Lyra |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Well written Madame...James |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so very much for your reply, James ~ chipmunk flowerchild hugs Lyra |
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