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creative demolitionist
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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He thinks himself a sculptor. He is demolitionist. He takes a mallet to the stone-- he pounds away the finite chips of everything that is not HIM-- he takes a mallet to the stone. He is demolitionist... Then? He weeps--he weeps, alone. [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (08-17-2002 05:41 AM).] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Well put. Interesting style. ThisDiamond |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
How often people destroy the things they love most then regret it, but then it is too late, and lost. Good one Serenity. The most valuable thing you own is a smile, wear it, and share it. |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
this is an amazing little piece carved from my wife's monolith hit home and humbled here reflecting alone... BS I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wow! You're into the blues this morning. Nicely done.........I like the Blaze aspect here...Hummm....I can imagine that somehow.......Remember....."A Whiter Shade Of Pale" For me! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smile...playing now...as I type..and played at sunrise--after my wedding! *didn't forget you!* |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
God bless ya sweetie and congratulations! Hope everything went well!! I wanted to be there to take the blame for that song but mostly to have that dance with you. I could have given you away too. But I'm being too presumptious now....sorry... I know how you loved your dad so....He was there as a bold reflection in your spirit! Have a nice weekend! Your old Canadian poet buddy....Eric |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Quit peeking! LOL... smiling here... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ Well ... don't I just like this one, and wonder why ? Hmmmmm ! Thank you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh my gosh, this is just wonderful, I love it, art is truly all about what we feel aesthetically and descriptively and it certainly does feel like demolition when we chisel away! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I loved the concept you used to portray this Karen ... absolutely bang on, and brings such a clear visual to mind. An excellent write! Best wishes, /Kit |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
cool make sure its not a staute of mushroom yuh yhu |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I wanted to pop in to say a quick thank you, and sighs, I have been neglecting my good friends here in Open, and so? I think I'll get some coffee, and come back and do some reading--I've missed you guys! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
serenity- This is VERY cool. I knew from the title that I was going to love this one, and I was NOT disappointed. Hugs,  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
So is that what I am? frankly, this is great stuff to read and to feel... Regards, Sudhir |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
great concept, I love the way your mind works! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, Now isn't that a danty dish to set before the king. LOL |
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