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Magnus
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0 posted 2002-09-11 04:53 PM


I can only imagine the terror felt by those who where there..
Seeing the greatness of architecture fall.
Knowing that so many fell with the rubble...
Numbed by the sight and thought...
Fearful of what else might come...

This fear, born at our birth and carried inside us.
Escaping in past moments of terror on a much
more personal level...The tears, anguish, sobs
and screams...Echoing in our ears...

I wonder how it was during all of those great
wars of the past...When tens of thousands
died as terror rained down upon them...
Firemen, like our own...braving the elements
trying desperately to stop the burning, to
save innocent lives....

Sixty years later....so terrible and horrible
a taste of reality...One that our fathers felt,
that our mothers cringed at and wept tears
of sadness, pain, loss, loneliness....

Yet, through both that war and this tragedy...
From the ashes has risen an ever strengthening
nation...a democracy built upon one creed,
one thought....That all men are created
equal and that all should have the freedom to
live their own lives...to choose those that
governed and to wake each new day...

Wake from the comfort of their bed, not in fear,
but in the comfort of the umbrella this nation
has provided over us.....

May we never forget that war or this tragedy of
a year ago....May we always have peace
and democracy....For too many of our own lives
have been given in unselfish sacrifice to ensure
we have just that.....

Thank you to all who have stood firm behind us,
to all who have stood beside us and to all of us
that remain strong and resolved to keep this
nation strong....that they may never have
died in vain...


© Copyright 2002 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
Suetang
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1 posted 2002-09-11 06:06 PM


Hello Barry

Your words are so powerful and your message so very strong.  This was so very moving.

Take care.....Sue

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I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
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2 posted 2002-09-11 06:13 PM


Very powerful message here Barry.
Excellent write m'friend.
~Hugging you tighter today~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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3 posted 2002-09-11 06:14 PM


enjoy
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4 posted 2002-09-11 06:23 PM


barry,

excellent heartfelt writing my friend.
yours words will touch many...lovely
write.
god bless.
amy

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5 posted 2002-09-11 06:47 PM


Barry, a most touching tribute. I will never forget any of the wars, but this sure hit home the most.
What a sad day this is.
Sandra

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6 posted 2002-09-11 07:46 PM


I have never experienced the reality of a war or a tragedy like this. Your poem has certainly given me some perspect. Thank you.
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7 posted 2002-09-11 08:04 PM



May we never see such tragedies again...

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8 posted 2002-09-11 08:10 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) God Bless You, sweet friend, I too pray no tragedies like these will ever happen again and we can begin to unify together in loves faith, my heart goes out to your own experiences and all the victims and children of 9/11, this is powerful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

(God Bless America)

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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9 posted 2002-09-11 08:11 PM


dear Magnus, pray that our resolve is as strong as it was sixty years ago.  the stakes may be higher this time.
Annika:-

"Oh, do not ask, 'What is it?'
Let us go and make our visit."
-Eliot

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10 posted 2002-09-11 08:28 PM


I remember seeing a tv interview with high school kids a short time ago. They said they weren't interested honoring war heroes or events since war was something they had never experienced and it was hard to relate to.

Wonder what they are thinking now.....

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11 posted 2002-09-12 03:04 AM


I remember some survivors of the trade center made comments that many were told to go back to their work stations by someone that was obviousely a fool...I would have told those fools where to go...Many more would have made it out if they evacuated immediately...James
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12 posted 2002-09-12 04:11 AM


A powerful message magnus,

Zall

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13 posted 2002-09-12 09:32 AM


AMEN!
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14 posted 2002-09-12 09:35 AM


I echo Dixie's sentiments. Well done Barry.
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