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A Rictameter Prayer
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A Rictameter Prayer |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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I pray the fragile heart be bestowed quiet strength Not be devoured by bitterness The mind rid of torturing images Free to react decisively Aided by tender peace Earnest wishes I pray |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
a lovely prayer, indeed Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
Prayer makes things look different. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) God Bless You, sweet friend, I too send hugs all the way to Singapore as we too embrace your compassionate words so dearly and pray together for all the victims and their families! (wipes tears) God Bless You, sweet friend, you are a special friend to us all, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Heng, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton (God Bless America) "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thank you for this. It is so good to have you back here with us! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
kaile----BTW, "kaile" is a very pretty name! This rictameter prayer, was very well done. I also like the visual that is created by this particular form. "the mind rid of torturing images"---oh, if only it were that easy! Earth Angel |
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