Open Poetry #22 |
Give Me Pain |
Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
I wish my night was full of pain Agony, hurt, and grief I'll gladly take it all dear Lord To bring the world to peace I'd suffer well, and cry outloud I'd writhe in misery Never asking it to stop So give me pain, I plead Please God, bring us peace tonight. Rest well America!! God, and soldiers are watching over you! |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
raising glass to that, Kris yes brian |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Peace and harmony. The price we pay is so high, the reality so elusive. Peace to you, Kris. |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
"The price we pay is so high, the reality so elusive." Well done, Kris. Sincerely, Titus "I'll prepare myself, and one day my time will come." |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Kris...I feel that you have spoken for many with these few words. Great poem...Paul |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I echo these sentiments Kris. You said it all too well. Thank you for this. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
If only that were all it took to bring about world peace!---then all our PIP sisters and brothers would join hands with you and shout from the rooftops---"Bring it on! We can take it!" Earth Angel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(tears fall down my cheeks) God Bless You, sweet friend, today I too pray with you in remembering all the victims and their families and children, you are a true angel of words, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton (God Bless America) "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Especially well thought. Thank you for this. ThisDiamond |
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EarthenSoul Member
since 2002-05-30
Posts 163WA, USA |
I'm with you & Earth Angel. Bring it on! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
every one you write touches me so deeply Kris, thank you |
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