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Open Poetry #22

the 10th, a year later

Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2002-09-10 10:16 PM

the last picture
is the first I awake with
the moment frozen in my eyes
hanging my heart
the anquished reality
of a beautiful day
that races through
the sunshine falicy
how thoughtful of you
to keep it so
just the perfect illusion
so we would'nt notice
how horriable
we could be to ourselves
but those moments
those rarities we create
to become graceful once more
and to sing with the wind.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-09-10 10:17 PM

Awesome write

Cold hands means a warm heart

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2002-09-11 08:42 AM

The sunshine fallacy...

and yet, without hope, what?

Well done, Sir...

Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

3 posted 2002-09-11 12:07 PM

An awesome and inspiring write.

Love,
Me

It is a blessing to have wings for words and passion in pen.

Marina Crossley

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

4 posted 2002-09-11 01:15 PM

Open eyes are the best way to see.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

EarthenSoul
Member

since 2002-05-30

Posts 163
WA, USA

5 posted 2002-09-11 01:35 PM

Sing with the wind my friend, sing with wind.

TradingSpaces19
Member

since 2002-08-31

Posts 134
Arvada, Colorado

6 posted 2002-09-13 06:00 PM

good job

andrea

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