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geenabee Member
since 2002-09-10
Posts 59NC--USA |
OK here's my poem for the day, makin it up as i go Smiles of delight are way too costly to waste on these empty walls. But each day has its miracles! Light through the pane, leaves with their rustle, despite worry's nagging, still provoke the gentle soul and awaken new contentments. Passion's death? No. Transformed by time to a new state. An opened crysalis. Emerging into a bright world chaotic and new, with a lusty cry and gasp of awe, the brilliant thing needs no witness to arch and climb on winds of change. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
..."Transformed by time"...nicely put! Earth Angel |
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geenabee Member
since 2002-09-10
Posts 59NC--USA |
thankee  I think this poem is about getting old, losing the edge from the things that drive us, and replacing them with more substantial things...if this helps any. gb |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
the brilliant thing needs no witness to arch and climb on winds of change. very well written geenabee, I loved the last line! If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I'm glad that I read this, Geenabee, It's just what the doctor ordered! beautiful! ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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geenabee Member
since 2002-09-10
Posts 59NC--USA |
....coming from you tier, i think i can quit writing poetry now you're all so wonderful here!!! ty, gb |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Geenabee, I understand what you are saying, I agree wholeheartedly the only constant thing is change but I can also agree it's all happening too fast and if we keep living substantially we will never be satisfied it seems! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, welcome to Passions by the way, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is wonderfully written Cold hands means a warm heart |
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