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Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

0 posted 2002-09-10 02:17 PM

I want to travel the states
and meet the american wonder
A woman who thinks

She knows her freedoms
and only succumbs to who she wills
not taken or given to a man
for a pair of leather shoes

Most countries have strict rules
woman will do as their told
some are even sold
Mind your ears and settle your fears for here in the Grand U. S. of A.
Woman are voting and well on their way

No they have not gained their equal share
but the game is changing
and woman are rearranging
what you see

They used to be sexual deprieved
now they have become sexual alive

So I want to see thee new landscape
of this great country

Where I can witness my true belief
that all are equal
if they want to be

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

1 posted 2002-09-10 02:31 PM

Some might doubt thy motives, much.

it is good that you ended it with the line you did, it's kind of like a softening of the statement you might be construed as making

I hope I'm not confusing you as much as I'm confusing me.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

2 posted 2002-09-10 03:30 PM

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2002-09-10 03:47 PM

I like the ever changing landscape of this great country. Very thought provoking Thomas.

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

4 posted 2002-09-10 04:05 PM

Again I smile

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

5 posted 2002-09-10 04:25 PM

Applauding...ain't life grand

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

6 posted 2002-09-10 04:26 PM

Man this was a good poem. I enjoyed reading it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

7 posted 2002-09-10 06:34 PM

I appreciate your comments
:P

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