Open Poetry #22 |
Second Chance |
Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Second Chance She's headed to New Orleans, on that late midnight train Her heart filled with hope, she does her best to block out the pain Her shackled heart but for a moment, felt slightly unchained As she became one with that early September rain Her soul was thirsty for love, she could feel it deep inside Scared though to admit it, it was just easier to pretend and hide At the same time she was seeking instant liberation, from pain she wanted to be free So she continued on that train, prepared for what was meant to be She doesn't know what to do, now that love is giving her a second chance Should she throw caution to the wind and dance love's final dance? Knowing there is no guarantees, there's no safety net She slowly starts to take that first painfully hard step She has to reach for the moment now, before it slips on by Take it and fly Train stops at the station, and she steps out with moon full and bright Feeling her heart and soul warmed by loves light She doesn't know what to do, now that love is giving her a second chance Should she throw caution to the wind and dance love's final dance? Knowing there is no gurantees, there's no safety net She makes her first move, yes she takes that first step "if irish eyes are smiling...they are probably up to something" :) |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is awesome. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Very very good m'dear, I enjoyed Maree |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, Amy/Aim, very gentle smile..we always have to keep taking those steps..Very well done, indeed |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay!!! Oh Amy, I love this, this is beautiful, yes, love is always worth fighting for even when it may fail the first time, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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