Open Poetry #22 |
senyru--loner's challenge, I think |
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
sins of the summer coated in sleek white shimmer winter blankets ground ©September 10, 2002 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, I'll seek the lighthouse evermore. [This message has been edited by VAS (09-10-2002 09:43 AM).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
You knew I'd have to read it it it was a Haiku or Senryu, didn't you. I love it. In fact, I think you wrote a Haiku Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
one purest said that if it has a metaphor in it it's not haiku, I wasn't sure, but I thought perhaps coated and blankets would have to be called metaphors and I don't think I can say it has a twist at the end I always used to think the syllable count and nature as the subject was all that was needed in the 3 line form now, I'm often too daunted to call anything haiku Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
VAS, The write was right, enjoyed. |
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