Open Poetry #22 |
Dunno whats up |
TriXter Member
since 2002-03-20
Posts 112The One |
Dear lord help me with my toughts, with my fears.. somone wake me, im dazed and confused in this so called dream the life thats so beautiful so to seem the only light i see is from a sun beam peircing through dark shadows, and arrow through my heart so hard for you have i stood and faught youre heart i strive but still not caught, bolted down with 4 guards, steel and a padlock i just dunno whats up. re-thinkin my plans of life and whats to be when i hear sappy songs its you i cant help to see lookin like you care less, you i want to coress so much stress, to you lord i confess all my sins all my fears all the stupid acts that ive said or done from standing and facing, from lookin to run for all the teen stuff that we consider fun to you i pray and beg for a new life to blessed with few children and a loving wife cause i jus' dunno whats up. new school new people but same ol' tude, new people with new thought but still actin rude thinkin they hot shhh and they comin through thank god youre so different, that their not you but a new girl ive met and i think of too. dark clouds over my head, aint no sunshine victum to my lowly heart, im on the shooting line prepared for the worse, for my heart to end in a hearse cuz with all the roughness down, its the Trix curse. im prepared to lose, and i jus' dunno whats up. The man of few words... |
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geenabee Member
since 2002-09-10
Posts 59NC--USA |
Love the grit! feelin' the distress hopin stuff gets ok love sucks... then you get hitched and it gets worse just kiddin |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
And the further you go the more you don't know what's up. I guarantee. Nan(Pilgrim variety) |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I like the way you make your feelings flow. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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