Open Poetry #22 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sugar and spice, and so much nice and headaches and PMS too. Lord, I ask again...just once more... Why are women here on the earth? Why can’t it just be us guys doing guy things? I know...you told me this, once before... A woman is that part of heaven that I give. A woman is that heart for which we all live.... But... Lord....I already know all of that.. Remember...you told me that... Why are they here? You took my rib that they might breath that one breath... One which brought before me beauty beyond compare.. One which has touched me in more than many ways.. That has comforted and consoled me through those days... But Lord.....isn’t there more to life than just that warmth? How about the other stuff? You know what I am saying... After all, all I really need is just to get some attention... To feel that I am worthy, that I am loved and needed... That.....someone cares about me..... What? You mean THEY feel that way too? And...that if they feel this, they will give the flower of life..... to hold and keep, to cherish and endear...To love and protect....to comfort and console....and more... All of this Lord? Just by giving to them...those things that WE, the men want so much too? Yes Lord...now I understand.... Without them....life would not be, or become that which we might want it to be.... This is why we have a Mother Earth... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Barry, this is soooooo beautiful, and I truly believe in the spirit of Shekinah and Mother Nature married to the grace of God that women filled this world with flowers and the prettiest treasures we cherish in which their hearts that make men better people blossom as! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I am adding this to my library now because it is timeless, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
You're a smart man, Barry. You got it right! Loved the fun/serious of this. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Barry I just loved this one and your sense of humour. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I love the way you presented this with humor, Barry... Most of it is true... but of course its always nice to see ourselves through a male viewpoint... thanks for posting ~ hugs from a W.O.M.A.N. chipmunk Lyra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful Barry! I admire the way you think! ~Mega hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so true Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Gosh, almighty Magnus---methinks you finally got it right! Now spread the word---well, I guess that's what you're doing with this right write! P.S.--This was very well written, humorous, and good advice for your fellow fellas! tehe Earth Angel (I'm really a WOMAN!) |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Pssst! Linda... Don't tell anyone.....but it was a girl that wrote this...I didn't do it... (threats received by male poets...telling me to delete the poem...or else!.....) If I do what they want me to...then I will have ten million angry women on me... threatening to .... who knows.... If I don't...it will be about a billion guys..all threatening to...well...you can only imagine... So, I am gracefully bowing out... I didn't do it...... (Joking of course)...you do believe me? Right? Right? |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Of course---I knew your were one of us all along! But, Peaches darling, why have you pasted that silly piece of hair across your lip! PS--I actually think it looks great on you---if you were a man! EA |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Barry - Great understanding with humor! Now never, ever forget why there are women! Did you know we sometimes like to do guy stuff. I'm even watching Monday night football. My Patriots had better win!! Hugs, Marti |
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