Open Poetry #22 |
Come What May |
Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Gather all the people to your way hurry, don't get left behind today you're wishing for the moon wake up the dream is ending soon stand up and be counted come what may The sun is setting capture it's last glow the stars are asking questions you don't know confusion lays it's claim and nothing ever stays the same shout your inner secrets before you go Untie your hands be free of all the pain Undress yourself before you go insane Who will take your heart, when the world falls all apart? make sure they remember both your names What am I doing here? Why are you so full of scare? What makes this heavy world go 'round? why am I a clown? the earth is moving fast before you know your time is past walls of silence will come tumbling down make history today, come what may... nothing more to say, let come what may... ~Tier 9/9/02 "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
A lot of truth in this Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
the earth is moving fast before you know your time is past walls of silence will come tumbling down I love these lines, Tier... They seem to tingle with universal truths ~ chipmunk hugs Lyra |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh my gosh, I love how you said this, become what may, I love it, may we all stand our ground and approach our ambitions with fervor and hope! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tiersdin, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nicely done Tier~ ~hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
A good principle to follow Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wisdom shines brightly here |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you all so much! *group * you've made my day, *smiles* ~tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
There's a resignation in the title, but a triumph in the words, Tier. Mikey |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thanks Mikey... it's a song really. *smiles* ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
You're back here in a big way Tier. Happy to be readin' ya again. This song of yours is a whirwind. ~Ed In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward". |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Awww... Thanks Ed... *smiles* ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
And let what may, always be. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"undress yourself before you go insane..." You've hit the nail on the head with that line! ----and by writing and spilling out your pains and frustrations like this(undressing yourself)---you'll never go insane!---at least, I hope not! I wouldn't want anything to interfere with your writing words of wisdom! Earth Angel |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Enjoyed the read, and if this is a sample of insanity we should all go insane. (time for a Jimmy Buffet song?) |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, Moonlight Romeo, Earth Angel, Midnite Sun, and Verdana... Group *smiles* ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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