Open Poetry #22 |
one man DREAMS |
juanrodriguez Member
since 2001-04-17
Posts 66ontario canada |
it is said that a man who holds true to himself and lives to understand and hold real emotions towards whats to be done and what has been done will reagain complet joy in his spirit within marking the world with his fears and wisdom to be reacalled in his demice it is not the way u fall but the way u aproach the destination AND WITH OUT HESITATION RE-STANDING TALL for 4 it all u need to think twice and be wice to not fall in entrapted predicaments that u alone can not bare dreams of a man to be the one all livin loves and love as equal because the real life will never have a scequel the dreams of a man is to be understood as all the teachings would but above it all IS FOR HIS DAUGHTERS TO CALL HIM DADDY! dough at times i do not show my love 4 u will always glow GABBY AND ANGEL my reason for standing tall when all obstacles cause me to fall LOVE IS HARD TO FIND ....BUT WHEN U DO ITS HARD TO DEFINE JUAN PABLO |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is wonderfully written Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Juan, it's obvious how much you love your children, and I am sure you stand very tall in their eyes. I admire the devotion and the feelings you shared in this write. With a little language editing, this can be a very powerful poem. It is anyway! but reads a little bit rough. Peace to you and your family, Kacy. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Children are the essence of love... and your message conveys that so well. check your spell checker next time...I'm looking forward to it. |
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EarthenSoul Member
since 2002-05-30
Posts 163WA, USA |
How sweet of you to write for your children. In them you may find true inspiration. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautifully penned...lovely tribute to your children. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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