Open Poetry #22 |
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Tell Me..... |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon ![]() |
Tell me in the soft hush that small space of time where empty is air silent is sound and a whisper too loud tell me in feathered words weightless thoughts of remembrance of love so that I might feel the tenderest touch upon my heart and breathe a sigh of love for you. WhiteRose |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
You have a very soft sable brushstroke in this poetry portrait. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
now that is how love should feel... *s M |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) Oh Anne, this is beautiful, I love it, and may each breath be spoken with faith and truth and happiness of loves afterglow! (kiss on cheek) You are a true modern Juliet, sweet friend, may your Romeo always charm you well, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I like the feelings of this poem Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
that small space of time where empty is air this sounds like a nice place to be right now, Anne... ![]() Lyra |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Very, very good. I love it ![]() Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Thank you all so much. You are all so very kind in your responses. ![]() |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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