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Careful Steps |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Walk careful Across the fragile spirit Be gentle Walk softly, Or your weight shall break it, Move slowly With great care, Measure each of your foot falls Place them there Don’t step twice, There might be nothing at all, Not thin ice But deep oblivion’s call. Gloom [This message has been edited by Professor Gloom (09-09-2002 12:11 PM).] |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Hi gloomy, another gloomy great from you.  Enjoyed! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Professor Gloom You have made a science out of gloom. A very good write, enjoyed. |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
love this... have wanted to say this to many times... Connie |
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Lady Ollyne Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 337East Coast |
as one who is always careful, Sir G this Lady measures her days by the smiles she leaves behind and her nights by the dreams sent to her on the winds of darkness. hmmmmmm or should that be wings of... [This message has been edited by Lady Ollyne (09-09-2002 01:58 PM).] |
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