Open Poetry #22 |
Purrrfectly Innocent |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Purrrfectly Innocent let me in, meowwwww... I want to stray with you yarn into the night tangle and weave together moments of play roam the darkness coverlet hide sounds of the purrrfect one held at my bay tones of the under a temptress, I be padding my hopes on a purrrfectly He shedding for no one but covers lay bared for night is in tempting what day's end holds shared Purrrfectly innocent meowwwwwing am I turning rings around Saturn and mourning his cry... to be warmed by his heartbeat to render in time I sweeten the taste sugarcoating in rhyme. *Sugarthoughts for Saturn "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"I want to stray with you yarn into the night tangle and weave together moments of play roam the darkness" What fun! I love it! Please spin a sequel. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
There's so much here to curl up against and get comfortable in. You be the cats meow Maureen!!! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
M, i loved this...you had a lot of fun with your words in this write and it shows...thanks for the smile so late at night, lovely way to end my day. take care amy "if irish eyes are smiling...they are probably up to something" :) |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Pretty kitty Kat Why do you do all of that? Pouncing my dreaming With all your scheming All night through you want to play Then you sleep all day. Innocent you’ll play Attacks movement in dreaming, Naughty kitty Kat Saturn running rings Mischievous little thing Exploring somewhere He should not be there What can you do about that Silly kitty Kat. Gloom The only way my cat would be sweet if he spilt sugar all over himself, shhhhhh, I best not give him any ideas or I will have a sugarcoated cat. Cute write |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"to be warmed by his heartbeat", imparts a whole lotta lovin' between you and your wonderful feline friend! I'm enjoying this warm fuzzy feeling I've gotten from reading this poem. Thank you! Earth Angel |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
This is wonderful, but no cat is perfectly innocent Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
supuuuuuuuuuuurrrrrbly done! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I have a big thick book with nothing but cat poems in it. I really like this poem. |
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