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Open Poetry #22

All Wrapped Up

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-09-08 10:44 PM

All Wrapped Up

I found
a heart
it blew
right next
to me
this amazing
stringless kite
floated in
on some
restless wind
tissue papered
and surrounded
and lifted
me on
it’s flight

I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-09-08 10:46 PM

Speechless

Cold hands means a warm heart

A. L. Becker
Member

since 2002-09-06

Posts 167
San Francisco, California

2 posted 2002-09-08 11:15 PM

dear 1slick_lady,
what a perfect little poem, it brought a smile to my lips. thank you!
Annie:-

"Oh, do not ask, 'What is it?'
Let us go and make our visit."
-Eliot

Miss T. Eyed
Junior Member

since 2002-05-26

Posts 47

3 posted 2002-09-10 11:29 AM

This poem is so light and airy, and full of happiness. I enjoyed very much.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2002-09-10 11:32 AM

you must be careful
with hearts found along the way
with which will you fly

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2002-09-10 11:49 AM

1slick_lady
What a bit of luck, enjoyed.

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

6 posted 2002-09-12 12:58 PM

missed this one
last time someone told me to go fly a kite, it wasn't nearly so pleasant an experience as this suggests . . .

enjoyed

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