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Open Poetry #22

Oh Waiter...Check Please

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2002-09-08 10:37 PM

surely
he is testing me
he knows
that this is sacred ground
cure me
of his hold on me
let these silences ring sound
now undo the compromise
I promised with a finger's cross
let this cup pass
captured bleed--
I will drink
red ink of loss...

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-09-08 10:38 PM

This was good

Cold hands means a warm heart

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2002-09-08 11:07 PM

this is the bitterest cup. . .

I know. . .

well done. . .

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Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

3 posted 2002-09-08 11:15 PM

Thoughts still out on this but wanted ya to know that I read.

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