Open Poetry #22 |
Lip Prints on the Moon |
CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Ask the pillow that tends my weary head, a soul semi dead in the ersatz warmth of a hush paled night full of fears, shed one more or a thousand rainy tears in chasm stillness, without a voice. Ask the morning that rises jaggedly in smoke and mirrors, taking me through a day of memories worn thin, starving from futility and bleary eyed fantasy. Ask the coffee maker how his coffee wakes me to bleak uncertainties that I can walk unencumbered, without faltering steps, downlonely paths of labyrinths in buff-blush bare, wearing only my rose brushed dreams I was born into this world, a beggar, surrounded by opulence You were at my banquet, dressed to kill, the main attraction…. …….Remember? I was the, bland, wall flower stranger who passed by…un-noticed Ask the sultry breeze strolling late at midday, brushing my hair, tickling my neck, whispering love poems, strumming my chords You were behind me,unaware of the beguiling sun falling down swirling chimera fragrances of rose petals Ah! If only you could listen to my best friend, the moon! How I have spent long graceful twilights sublime, writing silver stardust verses of rhapsody rhyme that keep Luna awake in longing till a belated dawn Ballads sung sweetly, softly champagne low, Can you see those fine uncertain blush lines on the face of such a pure effervescent moon? Those are my lip prints! Your name remains a mystery, as I pour from my soul cup to yours unlocking every passage to your inner court… Poetry is: Passion, imagination and intellect running together. Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa [This message has been edited by CSKpoet (08-16-2002 02:13 PM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
CSKpoet - I love the moon and all its romantic mysteries, and I love this write of yours, most enchanting... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Ballads sung sweetly, softly champagne low, Can you see those fine uncertain blush lines on the face of such a pure effervescent moon? Those are my lip prints!" (smiles) Awwwwwwww, I just love this, sweet friend, the entire vision is beautiful as this use makes me smile but that stanza stood out the most to me, I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
Cheryl, this is a unique gift, so many lovely images roaming around in this one... it leads one to various doors, all begging to be opened... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Cheryl, this is so amazingly beautiful. I absolutely love this piece! A keeper for sure! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetKoKo~ This is as lovely as it can be~ How wonderfully you've grown into your word-pictures~ You are just wonderful sweet lady~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Bill: I surely am in love with the moon I am glad this touched you ..thanks for the read and comments Noah: that iws also my favorite stanza....Jimi Hendrix kinda idea,,,LOL kiss the sky or kiss the moon... thanks for the comments ..you always make me smile. Elan: yes it leads to many thoughts and was intended to ..thanks for noting that and for you kind remarks. Enchantress: ah so it enchanted you too I an glad that it touched you in some small way...you are always so kind to me..thanks so much! Marge: ah, the moon got ya Marge! :rollin: Thanks for remarking on some growth. I sure hope I have grown a little bit...thanks and big hugs to you and to all, Cher Poetry is: |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
neat one |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cheryl, A delight to read, enjoyed every line. |
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