Open Poetry #22 |
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A Heart Made of Love |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon ![]() |
Each time it shattered some pieces were lost in the mending of my heart each time it fell apart. So it grew ever weaker as it became smaller but mend it I tried with the tears I cried. Every time it cracked it would spread rapidly until it just shattered until nothing mattered. I came to the conclusion this heart made of glass just needed to be changed it's atoms rearranged. So I built another one this one out of love the strongest force known especially when it's shown. It takes the pain better it hasn't shattered yet if broken..it will mend for this love can never end. I chose it for this reason this love strong and true to build me a heart brave with all the love you gave. WhiteRose |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Oh this is so lovely, Anne... I love the idea of re-building a heart. ![]() Lyra |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WhiteRose~ Lovely~ I've usually found that when my heart broke - it gave me more pieces of it to give away~ ![]() I am more for the giving~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful as usual Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! Oh Anne, this is wonderful, yes, always believe in love and do whatever it takes to hold onto it for if it remains it is meant to be! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My goodness, you're a prolific writer---and a good one at that. The message inherent in these lines, should well be heeded by the broken-hearted. Earth Angel |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
This was absolutely beautiful Anne. Take care....Sue I am in motion |
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