Open Poetry #22 |
![]() ![]() |
Depression? |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Depression ? tears always seem to be just beneath the surface ready and willing to seep forth should an element of doubt a painful remembrance a twinge of sorrow come to pass come to nag come to me ©September 7, 2002 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
||
© Copyright 2002 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved | |||
Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
V. I find that when I am depressed, I can't write....not very much... This poem speaks very accurately of the feel, cause that is what happens to me as well IF and when it comes in the dark of night or the dark of day.... |
||
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
VAS, Good thought, good write, good read, enjoyed. |
||
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, my gawd---do you ever tell it like it is. I've experienced moments in my life, like the ones you just so poignantly expressed with your quill. One of the ways to overcome our down-times (as you well know!) is through expressing it with the written word. It pours our pain onto the paper---and this you have done exceptionally well. May you not experience any such moments today! Love, Light & Laughter Linda |
||
anya Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 393London, UK |
I think you have captured those feelings so so well |
||
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You've nailed the way depression feels exactly with this write Virginia. Hope all is well with you.... ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
||
Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is right on, Virginia... a perfect description ![]() Lyra |
||
the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Perfect description Cold hands means a warm heart |
||
![]() ![]() |
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
![]() ![]() ![]() |
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |