Open Poetry #22 |
Happiness with you... |
JediRaver Junior Member
since 2002-08-16
Posts 23ATL, GA, USA |
Gliding my fingers through the currents of your hair brings elation to my face... The smiles that pour out of me shall bring my blood to bare the pulsing of my heart to you as my thoughts begin to race. Your eyes shine out to me brilliant in the night starbursts of emotion our love a fortress strong and true I can seek no other joy than happiness with you! Carressing the mountains valleys of your skin circumnavigate your shoulders in rhythmic ellipses while I hold you close to me. My senses are awakened by the power of your touch; become alive and dream. Your lips quiver dancing in the dusk my love for you a temple...tranquil and serene Tucked so far away from view. I will trek a thousand miles for happiness with you! Connecting with your soul so precious as a gift bestowed upon my gladdened heart to nurture love and cherish you as an artisan whose vision never fades away or falls apart. My feelings mesmerized by your soft and gentle kiss massaging my very inner core as you revolve upon the oceans of my mind or like Eternal Spring... our love forever will renew... invincible... sharing happiness with you! -JediRaver |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! I see you bring the light of truth with your feelings into your poetry! I think you're going to like it here. Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome To Passions! Much enjoyed your first post! I look forward to seeing more of your work! ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you So you won't ever forget me ~ [This message has been edited by Enchantress (08-16-2002 02:06 PM).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Carressing the mountains valleys of your skin circumnavigate your shoulders in rhythmic ellipses while I hold you close to me. My senses are awakened by the power of your touch; become alive and dream. Your lips quiver dancing in the dusk my love for you a temple...tranquil and serene ================================== Happiness Indeed...someone inspires lovely things in your pen...this is a wonderful poetic dedication. Your phrasing and vocab added to its imagery brush stroked pleasures. Well done...welcome to Poetry Land..so nice to meet you. If all the tear drops went to heaven |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Yay!!! Oh Ryan, this is a beautiful and romantic debut, I love it, I wish for happiness to always be with the both of you, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Ryan, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ryan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JediRaver Welcome and I enjoyed your write. |
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