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Sunshine
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0 posted 2002-09-08 09:50 AM







© Copyright 2002 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-09-08 10:09 AM


Karilea~
Very lovely in thought AND presentation~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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2 posted 2002-09-08 10:10 AM


Karilea

Very romanticly lit, this always.  Beauifully done!

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3 posted 2002-09-08 10:40 AM


*****BRAVO*****

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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4 posted 2002-09-08 10:43 AM


Such devotion and warmth of one...
to yet another who gives...always

The bond of caring...the knowing
when...just a word says so much
of feel,  without the physical of
the touch..

You master it well..

Good Morning Sunny One

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5 posted 2002-09-08 11:00 AM


I really enjoy reading your beautifully presented poems, they are all so eloquent, and this one is no exception,
anya

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6 posted 2002-09-08 11:20 AM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, I have not the slightest clue how you do these but your wonderful words ALWAYS bring smiles to us all! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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7 posted 2002-09-08 12:26 PM


This is beautiful Karilea!
You are just too clever!
I love it...I love it!!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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8 posted 2002-09-08 02:21 PM


Yes you have the entire package tied up with a beautiful bow now that is for sure! lovely.

The most valuable thing you own is a smile, wear it, and share it.
Sharon    

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9 posted 2002-09-08 02:46 PM


Simply beautiful..always

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10 posted 2002-09-08 08:42 PM


A nice presentation for a beautiful poem, Karilea...
~ many hugs

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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11 posted 2002-09-08 11:35 PM


Sunshine...Always a pleasure to read...Paul
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12 posted 2002-09-08 11:43 PM


Looking for some candles for dinner tonight...gotta try that out Rod

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13 posted 2002-09-09 07:03 PM


enjoyed
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14 posted 2002-09-09 09:34 PM


Karilea, this is so captivating you know. Aww...

marie

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15 posted 2002-09-09 10:05 PM


Oh, Yes!! Wonderful Karilea! Chris

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16 posted 2002-09-10 04:48 AM


Enjoyed this Sunshine...James
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17 posted 2002-09-10 06:09 AM


Karilea, I guess that's why they say home is where the heart is, and many times this has been true for me.  Wonderful and beautiful write Sunshine!  Oh btw* good morning!

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

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18 posted 2002-09-10 09:52 AM


What a lucky heart

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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19 posted 2002-09-10 05:18 PM


If, Karilea,
I am reading these words
as I would a journal --

then congratulations!

If, on the other hand,
I am reading these words
as I would a poem --

then congratulations!

Mike

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20 posted 2002-09-10 05:21 PM


Hmm, Sissy, I think Katrina has been whispering to you..very gentle smile
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21 posted 2002-09-10 05:35 PM


Beautiful sentiments expressed as only you can do.
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22 posted 2002-09-10 08:26 PM


Beautiful...my how you've grown as a poet through the years we've known each other. I'm so proud of your accomplishments. Oh, by the way, it's great to be able to put that beautiful face to a name we've all grwon to love
Ruth

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23 posted 2002-09-15 07:27 AM



One of my first attempts to take the two mediums...I find for short, simple verses, it does a lot for me...and I am very glad it seemingly did a lot for you, too.  Thank you, my friends, for the casting of your eyes in this direction...

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