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CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

0 posted 2002-09-07 09:41 PM

sun rises
whispering in vineyards
sweet wine of daylight

for you I weep
moon scatters dreams
night conquers light

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-09-07 09:44 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Cheryl, this is sad but beautiful, sweet friend, may the night now be filled with joy for you just as the day, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-09-07 09:50 PM

Very beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2002-09-07 10:02 PM

As dawn and dusk, the undistinguished twins...
Romance weeps in these few and stellar lines.
ThisDiamond

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2002-09-08 11:22 AM

"Sun rises
whispering in vineyards
sweet wine of daylight"

I absolutely love this verse. So well done.
Very clever metaphor.

May the sun rise high on your day!
Linda

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-09-08 12:28 PM

Beautiful!!...

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2002-09-08 12:50 PM

Not too shabby, our lady of paradise....

You could certainly write an awesome 20 or
less, or just about anything...

Nicely done Cheryl....

CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

7 posted 2002-09-09 12:22 PM

Noah: smiles atcha and thanks
Loner: hugs and thanks
This dimaond: I appreciate that much!
Earthangel: God bless and thank you much
Enchantress: thanks for the read and words..hugs to you
Magnus: Well, Barry , if I gave ya 20 of these at once , what would I post for the next month? LOL
I thank you so much for your reads and kind comments..hugs to ya,
and hugs to all, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

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