Open Poetry #22 |
Do You Relate, Of Late? |
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Do You Relate, Of Late? (for the over 50 crowd) these moments of brainless state cause pine for satiate and often irritate the heart and soul of me a common word of late has letters that surely aggravate my ability to see and cat who’s come to dine three hours before past nine I seek to draw the line and put him out, does whine, from just beyond the door it is unnerving friend I’m quite at my wit’s end for things I’ve thought to do I am already through my brain’s a dinosaur need I say more? ©September 7, 2002 My thinker done thunk its way into decay what can I say, won't you pray? Whether on the shoal or on the shore, I'll seek the lighthouse evermore. [This message has been edited by VAS (09-07-2002 11:37 AM).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Virginia I can relate...can't tell you how many times I've retraced my steps to find the important thing I was going to do. Enjoyed this...if we can just remember to laugh..we'll be fine! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Virginia....this..ummm..this was.....oh, darn I forgot what I was gonna say!! Happens to me all the time....lol.....was I going up the stairs...or coming down the stairs? Enjoyed this write. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Yeah, Martie, like early on in my mourning days after my mother's passing I found ice cream 2 times in the microwave the next morning. What I see happening more and more are things I go to do I've already done and things I've thought were done were not. These particular thoughts have arisen because earlier this week, though a much better than average speller, I couldn't figure out how to spell stitch. I first spelled it 'stich' and thought, no it needs another t, so I tried sticth, which I could see was totally off the wall wrong, so I went back to stich. The next day I began kicking myself and mourning, even, because I know without a doubt it is spelled 'stitch.' 55 alive? You jive! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Virginia As long as you don't toast the sponge you'll be fine. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You don't need any prayers, 'cause your "thinker" is quite healthy---and it's evident with this write! P.S. If you want my prayers for anything else, just ask! I love your wit in this piece, and man, can I ever identify with what you're saying! Have a great day! Linda [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-07-2002 12:02 PM).] |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Oh dear, I have not reached 50 yet and this is me! Enjoyed the read |
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