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0 posted 2002-09-06 07:21 PM



                   ~~~ ~~~~ ~~~

               whispers in the dark
            unscripted words of romance
              murmurs of night's bliss

                   ~~~ ~~~~ ~~~
                                  

                                         Chris B.
                                      (Nightshade)
                                        Sept.2002
                                  


© Copyright 2002 Chris Barker - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-09-06 07:25 PM


Good one Chris!
Very nicely penned with just the right amount
of sensuality.
~Hugs and love ya, Teed~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

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2 posted 2002-09-06 07:25 PM


And beautiful it is. Sort of a "whisper" of a senryu.
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3 posted 2002-09-06 07:29 PM


Nancylee - Thanks sister of mine. I miss you lots. I'm "taking" coffee right now hugs!

WhiteRose - thankyou for reading and commenting sweet lady.

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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4 posted 2002-09-06 07:33 PM


Nice one Chris,
Love,
   Christine

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5 posted 2002-09-06 07:35 PM


Hi Christine!!! Thanks a bunch.

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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6 posted 2002-09-06 09:44 PM


peek-a-boo, sweet love
hear the sweet soft lullaby
as you close your eyes



YAY!!! Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this is breathtaking, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart sweet Chris, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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7 posted 2002-09-06 10:02 PM


Fantastic! BRAVO! Delightful



my favorite word of all, here:

unscripted

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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8 posted 2002-09-06 10:54 PM


very beautifully written

Kathi

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9 posted 2002-09-06 11:23 PM


Noah - dear one..thankyou so much - I love your reply.

VAS - thanks for popping in and reading and signing - I appreciate it.

Kathi - thankyou so much.

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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10 posted 2002-09-06 11:30 PM


"unscripted words of romance"

What an excellent line and lovely piece this is.

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11 posted 2002-09-06 11:32 PM


Dear Michael - I am so glad you liked this little offering.

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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12 posted 2002-09-20 02:07 PM


Beautiful Thankyou   J

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13 posted 2002-09-20 02:09 PM


oh blissful murmur
oh so romantic sighing
oh whisper to me

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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14 posted 2002-09-20 02:14 PM


This whispers so softly Chris,and is beautiful.  Hugs

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

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15 posted 2002-09-20 02:26 PM


Stubby - thankyou so much, and Welcome to Passions!

Interloper - sighing deeply here! Thankyou!

Donna - thankyou for reading and commenting and hugs right back at ya!!

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16 posted 2002-09-20 04:11 PM


---I want what you're having!!!

You packed a lot of emotion in three short lines! Very beautifully written!

~ smiles to you this fine day---and may your night be even finer!--from the sounds of it, that's a givem! tehe

Linda

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17 posted 2002-09-20 04:57 PM


Linda - thankyou so much and may your evening be "whisper soft" as well.

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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18 posted 2002-09-20 08:44 PM


Chris -

whispers in the dark
            unscripted words of romance
              murmurs of night's bliss

softness through the night
            touches of sweetness
              tenderness of senses...

BC

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19 posted 2002-09-20 09:07 PM


Hi Bill!! Thankyou for the romantic response.

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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20 posted 2002-09-20 09:23 PM


You do these so well.
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21 posted 2002-09-20 09:50 PM


SmartChick - I am actually just learning from the other poets here at Passions. Thankyou for your praise.

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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22 posted 2002-09-20 11:48 PM


This was so beauiful and heartfelt well done

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

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23 posted 2002-09-21 09:11 AM


Moon Dust - many thanks for reading and responding.

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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24 posted 2002-09-21 11:38 PM


Excellent, much enjoyed!
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25 posted 2002-09-22 12:55 PM


EagleOne - I am glad you enjoyed. Thankyou.

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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26 posted 2002-09-23 10:12 AM


I am so happy to find you like minalmist poetry as I do.Keep them comming.

paladin

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27 posted 2002-09-23 12:04 PM


paladin - yes, I do sometimes believe that "less is more." Thankyou!!
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28 posted 2002-09-24 12:29 PM


Chris,
I like what's written...
and what isn't.

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29 posted 2002-09-24 12:40 PM


Mikey - thanks for your comments.

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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