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Nightshade

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0 posted 2002-09-06 07:21 PM

                   ~~~ ~~~~ ~~~

               whispers in the dark
            unscripted words of romance
              murmurs of night's bliss

                   ~~~ ~~~~ ~~~


                                         Chris B.
                                      (Nightshade)
                                        Sept.2002

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

1 posted 2002-09-06 07:25 PM

Good one Chris!
Very nicely penned with just the right amount
of sensuality.
~Hugs and love ya, Teed~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

WhiteRose
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2 posted 2002-09-06 07:25 PM

And beautiful it is. Sort of a "whisper" of a senryu.

Nightshade

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3 posted 2002-09-06 07:29 PM

Nancylee - Thanks sister of mine. I miss you lots. I'm "taking" coffee right now

hugs!

WhiteRose - thankyou for reading and commenting sweet lady.

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Chrissypooh
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4 posted 2002-09-06 07:33 PM

Nice one Chris,
Love,
Christine

Nightshade

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5 posted 2002-09-06 07:35 PM

Hi Christine!!! Thanks a bunch.

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Mistletoe Angel

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6 posted 2002-09-06 09:44 PM

peek-a-boo, sweet love
hear the sweet soft lullaby
as you close your eyes

YAY!!! Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this is breathtaking, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart sweet Chris, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

VAS
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Oregon

7 posted 2002-09-06 10:02 PM

Fantastic! BRAVO! Delightful

my favorite word of all, here:

unscripted

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Stapleton13
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8 posted 2002-09-06 10:54 PM

very beautifully written

Kathi

Nightshade

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9 posted 2002-09-06 11:23 PM

Noah - dear one..thankyou so much - I love your reply.

VAS - thanks for popping in and reading and signing - I appreciate it.

Kathi - thankyou so much.

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Auguste

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By the sea

10 posted 2002-09-06 11:30 PM

"unscripted words of romance"

What an excellent line and lovely piece this is.

Nightshade

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11 posted 2002-09-06 11:32 PM

Dear Michael - I am so glad you liked this little offering.

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

*Stubby*
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12 posted 2002-09-20 02:07 PM

Beautiful Thankyou

J

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Deep in the heart

13 posted 2002-09-20 02:09 PM

oh blissful murmur
oh so romantic sighing
oh whisper to me

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Gentle Spirit
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14 posted 2002-09-20 02:14 PM

This whispers so softly Chris,and is beautiful. Hugs

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

Nightshade

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15 posted 2002-09-20 02:26 PM

Stubby - thankyou so much, and Welcome to Passions!

Interloper - sighing deeply here! Thankyou!

Donna - thankyou for reading and commenting and hugs right back at ya!!

Earth Angel
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16 posted 2002-09-20 04:11 PM

---I want what you're having!!!

You packed a lot of emotion in three short lines! Very beautifully written!

~ smiles to you this fine day---and may your night be even finer!--from the sounds of it, that's a givem! tehe

Linda

Nightshade

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17 posted 2002-09-20 04:57 PM

Linda - thankyou so much and may your evening be "whisper soft" as well.

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

18 posted 2002-09-20 08:44 PM

Chris -

whispers in the dark
            unscripted words of romance
              murmurs of night's bliss

softness through the night
            touches of sweetness
              tenderness of senses...

BC

Nightshade

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19 posted 2002-09-20 09:07 PM

Hi Bill!! Thankyou for the romantic response.

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

20 posted 2002-09-20 09:23 PM

You do these so well.

Nightshade

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21 posted 2002-09-20 09:50 PM

SmartChick - I am actually just learning from the other poets here at Passions. Thankyou for your praise.

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Moon Dust

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22 posted 2002-09-20 11:48 PM

This was so beauiful and heartfelt well done

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

Nightshade

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23 posted 2002-09-21 09:11 AM

Moon Dust - many thanks for reading and responding.

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...

24 posted 2002-09-21 11:38 PM

Excellent, much enjoyed!

Nightshade

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25 posted 2002-09-22 12:55 PM

EagleOne - I am glad you enjoyed. Thankyou.

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

paladin

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26 posted 2002-09-23 10:12 AM

I am so happy to find you like minalmist poetry as I do.Keep them comming.

paladin

Nightshade

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27 posted 2002-09-23 12:04 PM

paladin - yes, I do sometimes believe that "less is more." Thankyou!!

bsquirrel

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28 posted 2002-09-24 12:29 PM

Chris,
I like what's written...
and what isn't.

Nightshade

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29 posted 2002-09-24 12:40 PM

Mikey - thanks for your comments.

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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