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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-09-06 02:33 PM

Just a short note, all I ask for...
Something that would help me decide.
I checked the mail, that empty slot.
Oh Lord, is this something to hide?

Just a word, a cherished true thought,
a few syllables of your sense.
To lead me, forever guide me.
Am I that dumb, am I that dense?

I looked again, nothing was there.
I prayed to see, to feel again.
I walked away, a tear did fall.
Please dear Lord, please tell me just when!

They said if I needed you, you would.
You would drop a note right away
I asked, I prayed, I said I’d wait
Now it has been another day.

Yea though I walk a lonely path
that carries into harm's own way.
I shall walk and feareth not wrath
as I give thanks to you each day.

CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

1 posted 2002-09-06 02:37 PM

WOW! This is awesome! Waiting for that word of life... I love how you expressed your feelings. hugs, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2002-09-06 02:45 PM

That eternal request of us humans to ask for patience immediately...

all good things come to those who wait...
but if He requires an extra stamp for that mail, tell Him I'll be glad to go get it!

A wonderful job, Barry, of showing us that the messages come, all in His good time....

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2002-09-06 02:48 PM

Beautiful piece, indeed!
I love it

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2002-09-06 03:26 PM

I sure relate to that waiting and hoping feeling.
Well done, Barry
Sandra

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

5 posted 2002-09-06 03:27 PM

Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-09-06 03:29 PM

(big hugggsssssss) As some wise philosophers quote, patience is a virtue, and while it takes much time for good things to come, their value is priceless and untainted when it comes around! (sigh) This is fabulous, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2002-09-06 03:58 PM

Barry

Sometimes the special delivery comes without you even knowing it til much later.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

8 posted 2002-09-06 03:59 PM

Hmmmm...

You write very well. Reflecting on the theme...
Have been here waiting for the note many times...sometimes the answer has been no note...sometimes the note was waiting on my very own kitchen table...(occassionally the toothe fairy hand delivered one)...but that doesn't really happen.
As you can see...your thoughts here caused a pause in my synapsis and requires much thought. Goal achieved Poet! ThisDiamond

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