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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-09-06 01:56 PM


At one time I had many friends
But as it turns out
Most were losers

I would make plans with them
And they would not call to cancel
They just didn't show up
And called a couple days later

They liked getting me in trouble
I got a referral
My last year of high school
And almost couldn't walk at my graduation
Because of my loser friends

So I finally decided
To ditch those loser friends of mine
And I have done better
Since I have done so.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2002-09-06 02:00 PM


Good on ya.

Madame Chipmunk
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2 posted 2002-09-06 02:01 PM


This shows that you are maturing...
You no longer bow to peer pressure,  Very good for you, Julie...
~ hugs of good for you

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
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3 posted 2002-09-06 03:14 PM


Now you have me Julie.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-09-06 03:19 PM




(smiles) Yay!!! Yes, if they can't respect the wonderful person you deserve to be treated as then they don't deserve to be your friends! (kiss on cheek) You go girl, hehehe, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2002-09-10 04:38 AM


Yes I am starting to feel like a few of my friends are losers...or should I say good weather friends...but when it gets tough where are they...James
Earth Angel
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6 posted 2002-09-10 09:58 AM


Kudos for this write---and kudos for you finally getting your life right!

~ smiles ~

Earth Angel

A. L. Becker
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since 2002-09-06
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San Francisco, California
7 posted 2002-09-11 01:04 PM


I really like your writing style it is so straightforward and honest and well constructed.  great stuff!

"Oh, do not ask, 'What is it?'
Let us go and make our visit."
-Eliot

geenabee
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since 2002-09-10
Posts 59
NC--USA
8 posted 2002-09-11 01:52 PM


I had loser friends too
boy oh boy can they drag you down
until you don't recognize yourself

gestalt v/s environmental psychologists
should walk around a high school one day
and they'd agree
that teenagers are the cruelest
cruelest
people.

glad to read ya,
gb

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