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Inspired by Earth Angel . . . pines . . . Haiku
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Inspired by Earth Angel . . . pines . . . Haiku |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
lumed limbs are outlined pines backlit by harvest moon soaring sentinels Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. [This message has been edited by Interloper (09-06-2002 09:43 AM).] |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
A lovely haiku by you. Enjoyed! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your use of alliteration adds even more music to this magical moment, sweet muse! Linda |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Just lovely, morning sighs, Chris  Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Nice picture you have painted for the reader. Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!? |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
I had to reply again. I like the use of the pine tree in this. It works well. A strong evergreen, withstanding all seasons. Nice! Hey dog, did you see the size of that chicken!? |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
orange sun blushes in conifer fairytales swaying sorceress  (smiles) Yay, I love this, oh my gosh, Linda is a wonderful poet just as you are, I love this lush vision! (big hugggssssss) Excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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