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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2002-09-06 05:24 AM

Brown Eyed Hula Girl

Watched her dancing hula at a show in Waikiki.
It was then I knew she was the hula girl for me.
I couldn't take my eyes off of her from the first to the last dance
and when the show was over I thought here's my big chance.
Oh yes I wouldn't dare miss this opportunity to tell her
she was the hula girl for me.
I walked right towards her a million miles from shy.
I introduced myself as I looked into her big brown eyes.
I told her she was the only hula girl for me.
She smiled and said "Yes, we shall see."
"We'll see if you can do the hula with me."

JamesLee
Sept06
2002

[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (09-06-2002 05:26 AM).]

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-09-06 08:10 AM

(smiles) Oh James, this is wonderful, I love it, yes, and may your hula girl always dance the ways of life with you and bring paradise to your heart! (big hugggsssss) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

2 posted 2002-09-06 09:12 AM

I walked right towards her a million miles from shy.

This is cute. I hope she was the hula girl for you.

"I can't stay on your life support, there's a shortage in the switch"~~Pink

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2002-09-06 01:41 PM

JamesMichael, I bet you're too busy with your hula lessons to read this reply! Teehee

Linda

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

4 posted 2002-09-06 01:50 PM

This is too cool. I like the way you wrote this.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Tammy Blessing
Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 366
PA

5 posted 2002-09-06 01:51 PM

Hehehe... Can you REALLY dance the Hula? I'd like to see that..I really would. I really enjoyed this Michael. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.
Peace,love,light and Hulas,
Tammy

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

6 posted 2002-09-06 01:54 PM

James, you find nore women by accident than most men do after a determined search

I love it!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

7 posted 2002-09-06 02:48 PM

ahhhhhhhhh Yay! hey keep your eyes on the eyes and hands...LOL I am so elated to read this one, James..after a lot of really sad writes
Jeez I bet she is adorable. I have watched those shows many times..love that hula!

aloha, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

A. L. Becker
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since 2002-09-06

Posts 167
San Francisco, California

8 posted 2002-09-06 03:08 PM

dear James, very cute!!! remember, in hula, the hands tell the story!

Annie :-

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

9 posted 2002-09-06 03:23 PM

James, how fun this is. Glad you got the girl. (I always wanted to learn hula)
Sandra

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

10 posted 2002-09-07 09:59 AM

JamesMichael~

'a million miles from shy'
ADORABLE line~

Keep dancing sweetie~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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